Reviews for Raven's Valour
YourFloorIsNowLava chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
lol! This was a funny chapter! I liked it! A lot of fun to read. :D

I do get a little confused as to who narrates each chapter though, so maybe you guts could put a little plug in the beginning that says, "This chapter is from so-and-so's perspective" or something like that?

Other than that, keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to the day I get the email notification of the next chapter! And an action chapter as well! I can't wait!

See you around! SmashMobius out!
Azriel chapter 3 . 3/10/2009
Really, you had to stop at three chapters? Come on! More, lol.
YourFloorIsNowLava chapter 3 . 2/27/2009
Excellent chapter! Love the action! Very well written :D