|Reviews for Believing in Heaven|
| Madiplier chapter 1 . 7/6
I'm a part of the little mermaid fandom and this was absolutely beautiful it actually brought tears to my eyes and my friend asked me what was wrong...then she read it and cried with me...thank you for writing this, logic does come in when it talked about the spell...but please if you add more to this please do...
| Victoria Camrince chapter 1 . 2/26
That last line broke my heartD and healed it again. This is amazing! and I love the way you interpreted the curse escape clause of Ariel not getting her voice back despite winning the bargain. A deal's a deal, I guess. And I foolishly read that part when Flounder washed up dead on the beach as him trying to go to land to see/speak with Ariel one last time
| Monica Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
An interesting take on what might've alternatively transpired. And the idea that Ariel's voice might not have returned even had she fulfilled the terms of the contract was an intriguing thought. This story was an engaging, bittersweet, and well-written composition. Thank you for the read.
| loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Aw exllcent fic
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Oh, you HAD to kill Flounder*cries*
| SAK00 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Very emotionally written ... great job! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I like this ending better than the movie's end. )
| loveghibli chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Waaaa so sad
| LandofMidnightRain chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Aw, this is so sweet. Very melancholy, but very sweet. It leaves a sweet ache in my heart. :') Nice job.
| bella chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
awww this is good. so good. so sad:(
| hi chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is amazing ,I am crying my eyes out!
| norisclub chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
awww this was so beautiful :) i cried at the end. really good fic well done :D
| LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Wow...this is very sweet.
I have a copy of the original Little Mermaid story. I think that HCA wanted to end it with the mermaid saying something like, "I myself shall strive to win an immortal soul...that in the world beyond I may be reunited with him to whom I gave my whole heart." That was cut out of the final version, but I think that that sentence would have fit perfectly here.
Great job! I almost wished that the movie went this way!
| jerry533482 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
That was...beautiful. It got me teary in the end. :')
| Annie chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Oh, and P.S. This literally made me weepy! (but in a good way of course!)