Reviews for Believing in Heaven
Monica Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/27
An interesting take on what might've alternatively transpired. And the idea that Ariel's voice might not have returned even had she fulfilled the terms of the contract was an intriguing thought. This story was an engaging, bittersweet, and well-written composition. Thank you for the read.
loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Aw exllcent fic
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Oh, you HAD to kill Flounder*cries*
SAK00 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Very emotionally written ... great job! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I like this ending better than the movie's end. )
loveghibli chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Waaaa so sad
LandofMidnightRain chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Aw, this is so sweet. Very melancholy, but very sweet. It leaves a sweet ache in my heart. :') Nice job.
MidnightRain
bella chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
awww this is good. so good. so sad:(
hi chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is amazing ,I am crying my eyes out!
norisclub chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
awww this was so beautiful :) i cried at the end. really good fic well done :D
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Wow...this is very sweet.

I have a copy of the original Little Mermaid story. I think that HCA wanted to end it with the mermaid saying something like, "I myself shall strive to win an immortal soul...that in the world beyond I may be reunited with him to whom I gave my whole heart." That was cut out of the final version, but I think that that sentence would have fit perfectly here.

Great job! I almost wished that the movie went this way!
jerry533482 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
That was...beautiful. It got me teary in the end. :')
Annie chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Oh, and P.S. This literally made me weepy! (but in a good way of course!)
Annie chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Wow. This. Is. Brilliant.

Excellent characterisation and pacing - such a bittersweet yet satisfying and warm piece. Frankly, I loved reading every single word of it - fantastic job!
Disneyfanatic99 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I loved it sooooo much, I almost started to cry!
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