Reviews for The Will to Live
problemhunter chapter 1 . 1/16
That was beautiful. Absolutely damningly beautiful. Each and every word you typed felt real, like the rush a fast approaching train, speeding towards a never-ending destination because even if it stops, it still goes on.

I'm glad for the way you portrayed the interaction between Mutagh and Eragon. It just felt... right. No other word that I can conjure within my limited vocabulary can describe what I read.

I hope that you'll never lose the motivation in writing great stories.
Mary-Sue chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Dude, I hope this doesn't sound awful, but ditch fanfiction. Think up some original characters, a nice plot, write a book, and publish it. Give me a book I can LOVE! Clearly, no one else seems capable of it.
Jade L chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Your writing is fast, gripping, and to the point. You are wasted on fan fiction.
James and Remus chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I love it!
fingers-falling-upwards chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
This was utterly beautiful and so goddamn in-character that it hurt. Thank you thank you for sharing
Karkitty will eat you chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That was freaking wonderful! Though it was also super sad...
corriandar chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Loved it (: If Inheritance hadn't ended the way it did, this is exactly how I would have wanted it.
Amazing writing style, beautiful ending, and most importantly; realistic.
Thank you so much for posting this 3
SarahAndIchigo chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Absolutely enthralling. I can't describe how your writing made me feel :'( Murtagh and Eragon were so in character and I kinda wished that the red egg would hatch for Murtagh :'(
Slaavy chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I read it and I liked it.

I'm a bit speechless indeed. It's the firt time I read a story about this pairing and it's very well written, and so sad and sweet in the same time.

I really like your story.
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Amazing. The story felt very realistic and well written. Both the characters emotions were presented well. Love the ending and Murtagh being freaked out. ;) Saphira and Thor's little babies! Yay!
Wolfsaint chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This is the only slash pairing I read (besides Cloud/Zack occasionally) and most of them are senseless drabble about nothing but sex. I'm happy to say that this is not one of them. Beautiful, thoughtful, sweet, sad, lovely, happy...everything. Lovely characters, lovely plot, lovely introspection, just lovely. Ignore the judgemental fiends of the fandom. They mean nothing and no amount of harmful words can ever erase the fragile beauty that is your work. :)
Muffy the Dough Slayer chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
PhantasienFreiheit chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
I cried at the almost EVERYTHING in this story! When Saphira died, When Thorn died, when Arya died...omg, it was so sad that I almost "x"ed out of the window before I decided that I wanted to read the whole thing. And Man, do i love this story! its sad and a happy story and you kept the characters in place, so thats a bonus. thanks a million.

Phanny out.
StuffRocksInnit chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Wow, wow and more wow. This story is totally awesome. I love it so, so much!

The best thing was the characters. You made them so believeable. Every detail of their personalities was perfect. Brilliant storyline as well, and even though most people would hate you for killing off all those characters, I found I rather like the world where it was just these two. And don't they make such a wonderful couple, eh? Love em', always have and always will.

It was perfection in so many ways.

!Instant fave!



Aki WildQueen chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Wow. This is depressing but hopeful at the same time. I still like it through.

Mr. Bunny thinks it's nice!


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