Reviews for Supergroup Stories
Lara-Van chapter 12 . 10/9/2008
Kal-El shall rise!

Yeah, that's right Lexy! You BETTER be having nightmares. 'Cause Superman's gonna hand your money-stuffed ass to you on a PLATE!

Anyhoo... I like it!
Lara-Van chapter 11 . 10/9/2008
A! EVIL, PSYCHOPATHIC, HYPER-NEUROTIC LEAGUE OF DOOM! I WANT TO DESTROY THEM AL!

Oh wait... but that would be wrong.

I love it, can't wait for the next installment.

Your writing is still shaky, but I like the storyline.
Lara-Van chapter 10 . 10/9/2008
Ooh! Kent-Luthor faceoff!
Lara-Van chapter 9 . 10/9/2008
I like it! Can't wait for more!
Lara-Van chapter 8 . 10/9/2008
Enter Clark! FINALLY!
Lara-Van chapter 6 . 10/9/2008
Wow. VERY Birds of Prey...

And... enter Clark... I hope!
Lara-Van chapter 5 . 10/9/2008
Alright. So I'm getting a SERIOUS X-men vibe here... which is cool, I guess. I like X-men. But where's Big Blue? I miss Superman... *tear*
Lara-Van chapter 4 . 10/9/2008
Woot! Go Jordan! He always WAS one of my favorite of the 'freaks of the week'... Because for ONCE, the guest "villain" (quote-unquote villain) wasn't actually an evil rampaging psychopath.

I still think there could be more power to your writing. And definitely more dialogue.
Lara-Van chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
No, no that's not Lana. At least, not early-season Lana. It would make sense for her to behave that way after, like, season five or something, but that's not when this is set, is it.

Other than that, I like it so far.
Lara-Van chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
Uh oh!

A little brief, I think. The writing could be a little more solid, more dialogue. Maybe a little more emotion. It seems like you're just saying 'this is what happened'. No intensity, no feeling
Lara-Van chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Ooh... IDK where this is going, but I think I'm going to like it...

After all, you've got Lana as a vigilante... that's GOT to end up well...