Good ending. I really liked the entire story. It was well written, and well developed. Konoka's and Setsuna's kid seems to be adorable. Then again, all little kids are :)

kawai! by the way spoiler* konoka and setuna kissed 252 and chap from negima? 29 they kissed not a pactio!

Great story! I can't believe you're gonna end it there. Are you making a sequel? Anyhoo everything was awsome especially the epilougue. 'Kay can't wait for your next one.

Dana-chan out~!

aw the storys over? DX

its really good ;]

Great 's weird but funny and nice

interesting ending. makes me wonder if there's gonna be a sequel!

is the demon gonna get revenge?

all in all a pretty cool story!

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You stories are intriguing, you come up with alot of decent story plots, and I find all of them enjoyable. However, your OC is a bit spotlight taking and a bit of a Gary-Stu. Try and tone down the concentration on him, even if he is a big part of the story, just add a few flaws and such to make sure he doesn't go overboard as an original character. Still like your stories though, keep it up.

I enjoyed reading your forth you for updating.I though it was kind of good wait for your next update.

Cool chapter XD Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read hte next chapter XD!

Yay Konoka pactio with Setsuna XD.

AWESOME! i hope the next chapter is longer..This fic is really good! UPDATE! _

Hey I love your chapters 2 and job on writing them.I hope Setsuna and Konoka survive the forward to reading the rest.

AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chpater XD!

Fate-kun your doing good but, one thing. You have to much dialouge. Don't worry I used to write like that until I got alot of help from one of the other writers here. I don't enjoy being a critic but, you need more description in your chapters and stories. I really like your work but, just add more description k.

Maybe a bit short but enough to make me curious about the next chapter.