Reviews for The Charlatans of Burbank Avenue
bri-notthecheese chapter 12 . 8/1/2015
Oh my gosh I am so late to the party on this fic, but I AM IN LOVE WITH IT! I love this ship and the way you've written them is just glorious!
Rin Sessys Girl chapter 12 . 7/21/2011
How is it such love for a insane criminal master mind can be found to be damn right? Damn the love for BB damn it to hell! I have fallen hard like a bag of rocks to the depths of a watery despair for that evil twin look alike! But I still love you L *pats* Don't worry I'll just obsess over you both, like any normal rabid fangirl. xD Do say there is more? I wanna know how fucked up this is gonna get. XD


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NightOfAThousandDreams chapter 12 . 7/18/2011
I know this is a rather old story...but it certainly is fascinating. Definitely not the norm of a Death Note fanfiction. The complex situations, the various pairings, the sex, the's simply magnificent. This story deserves a proper ending. I'm most definitely not the one you would ask to finish a story (especially without an outline), but finding someone willing to finish it for you would be a good idea. There's not enough Naomi fics out there, much less LxNaomi or BxNaomi. She deserves this awesome story to be finished.

If not for the fans, do it for Naomi! :)


chappyruka411 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This story i am not finished with but i love it its so naughty xD hmmm make a 3 some with bbxLxNaiomi ? x) it was good i like it so far
train to greenwich chapter 12 . 1/18/2011
Whoa. Dark humor, cynicism, and revenge. You've got quite the story here. I believe I'm addicted.
TheCatchingLightAlchemist chapter 12 . 10/2/2010
Best. Story. Ever. More Please? Pleeeeeeeeeease?
Valvatorez chapter 12 . 6/29/2010
...hehheheh Ha Ha Ha, HAHAHAHAHAHA! AKA, the BB cackle.
BluePaintedWeirdo chapter 10 . 6/2/2010
you know, it really would be an interesting twist if she got pregnant;) SERIOUSLY UPDATE! If you're not dead (I completley understand the lack of updates if you are) then UPDATE! this fic made me a complete-almost-as-much-of-a-fan-girl-as-of-L with B and Bxnaomi I wanna know hos its gonna end! please pleasepleaseplease...T_T
BluePaintedWeirdo chapter 12 . 5/31/2010
aw, please update:( pleeeeaase..? I love this love triangle! There should be more of them..;P
sdfgdsfg chapter 10 . 5/19/2010
arisu rin chapter 2 . 4/17/2010
Is it normal for me to be thinking of the Joker reading this? I keep thinking of a psychopathic clown instead of BB.

It's a good story though, I just have brain malfunctions. I like BB, maybe of his desire to be he wants to exceed L. I'm going to keep rambling, so I'll be quiet.
Anonymous chapter 12 . 4/15/2010
Please update! I hope you're going to continue this, coz I'm really looking forward to the smut net chapter!
Ra'iira The Fiend chapter 8 . 3/27/2010
Well, I can say that this whole story was COMPLETELY unexpected. By the way, For Your Entertainment by Adam Lambert makes me think about B/Naomi for some reason...
mipah chapter 12 . 3/11/2010
this is so good. i would never have thought this love triangle would be so intresting.
BeyondBirthdayIsAwesome chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Hiya! I just wanted to say that I freakin' love this story! I've already read it all and I think you captured Beyond's personality perfectly! You have talent, truly! Please, if you could write another BBXNaomi fic? That would be totally awesome! Anyway, keep up the good work! :D
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