Reviews for Sweet Sixteen: The Alternate Version
Dyaln chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
She gave Rangiku gave Orihime her first dildo
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
this was fun and being the perv that I am, I immediately knew rangiku gave orihime a dildo xD
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
this was so funny i got it straight away was so funny i'm guessing Rangiku got her a vibrator or something i never read the original version only this one Rukia, Tatsuki and Rangiku are so dead lol there so mean
Sleeze chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Rangiku gave Orihime a stripper outfit.
LW12 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Very good
XIAN chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
okay i know this 2015 but still this is suprising its amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Because I have no life I liked this version better *starts to cry*
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
errr lube?
adriene.m.marshall chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Okay. So, I figured out the strawberry joke 5 seconds after Rangiku-sama first said, which is when it first appeared, and Rangiku-sama's present to Orihime-chan is a didlo.
bruja-esme chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Loved it ! You my friend are a great writer !
MisterEl chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I literally opened my mouth and put my hand over it when I read the part with Hime finding Ichigo tied to his bed. Great lemon.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
She gave her a vibrator
Luis chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
AMAZING!:) i loved it:3 to me its like orihime and ichigo actually make LOVE not just have "the S word" ›.› haha but anyway i love your ichihime fanfic! keep it up.
HellYus chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
"She wants a strawberry"

Bwahaa! I was laughing so much at that! Amazing story, really! It was a lot of fun to read. :)
VampireAreej chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Both are amazing
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