Reviews for The Toll of Adventures
crazyweirdpickel chapter 1 . 1/20/2020
Oh dear, I didn't look at the update date. This is an interesting concept, you can't just give up on it!
crazyweirdpickel chapter 2 . 1/20/2020
This seems like a cool idea! I never thought about how traumatised Luigi must be since he was kidnapped as a newborn. I'm intrigued to see the next chapter.
C. Mechayoshi chapter 2 . 3/29/2018
Too bad it's over...
C. Mechayoshi chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
So amazing. Too bad I’m late to the party.
noamiimaon chapter 2 . 11/13/2015
My oh my, how very InterestIng. :3
Unkonown Reviewer chapter 2 . 1/21/2009
I love this! You must continue. This is going straight to my favs. List! .
Raykura-Kura chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
Nice. This story really has my intention, and it's my two favorite genres! I also like the fact that it's about Luigi. Nice work on this. The chapters could stand to be longer, but that would make the update-wait longer, so I'll leave that decision to you.
MiniSlimShady chapter 2 . 9/29/2008
l is real 2401 isn't that from super mario 64 the mystery of finding luigi?
Vimtx chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
I like this, I enjoy reading dark/angst stuff, was there supposed to be humor so far? Some of these extrememly long sentences were very well written. Just try and keep the tenses the same, you keep switching between past and present, this is kind of annoying. Keep writing, I look forward to more ;)