Reviews for Lucky
Bee4ever chapter 32 . 11/22/2014
Awesome story!
Bee4ever chapter 2 . 11/21/2014
Jazz, you're such a bad boy! LOL
Waabishkizi-Maa'ingan chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
I've only got one thing to say. 5ft 4in is NOT tall. She's a shorty. XD
Incognito Llama chapter 32 . 6/19/2012
LOVE! Oh gosh I loved that so much! Nice job!
Lina Marie chapter 32 . 4/22/2012
fuckin love it! you are an amazing author! i really look up to you! and i would love it if ya read my story and gave me some pointers :)
White Fairy Writer chapter 32 . 4/6/2012
I LOVE this story! It's so good, and sweet, and it made me 'aww' and gasp, and grin, and you're like an amazing writer! Awesome story!
Bochord of Leaspell chapter 32 . 1/20/2012
Femme of course. After all, Sunstreaker and Sideswipe( I like him as the silver car in the movie) need someone(s) Don't they?
Taeniaea chapter 32 . 11/11/2011
cool story
TeresaFanFic chapter 32 . 6/2/2011
Great story!
Diamond White chapter 32 . 1/18/2010
HOLY SHIT! This fic was... awesome is an easy word to describe- awesome, wonderful, cute and really really really enjoyable. My mouth hung open at every chapter in awe. I loved it.
shadow-binder chapter 32 . 12/7/2009
this... story... is... AWESOME (and i can say it in no better way :D)
StarSwoop chapter 32 . 11/20/2009
sequel yay! twins should be 2 boys!
kali yugah chapter 32 . 10/1/2009
well i definatly want a sequel, i think that it should be twin femmes with the name star bright and artemis.
Wicked Falcon chapter 32 . 9/28/2009
Hope to see a sequel for this one. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. And I think they should be femmes. There is not many twin girls stories. Looking forward to it.
Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 32 . 9/26/2009


Its probably not the helpful constructive criticism

but I can't help it! I love it!

If you do write and post a sequel


The Lamborghini twins need a run for their money/credits/etc!

Adding to faves now!
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