Reviews for Take Me
Arthur Kirkland chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
YES. YES. Just yes.

Alternate ending -
As they were about to simultaneously release themselves into bliss, they heard a sharp clicking noise as the lock in the door had been undone.
*cue a very shocked looking Sidney Kasal*
Crystalliced chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Me: What happened to the patient?

Derek: Screw the patient, we're having sex!

Me: o.O
immacreeper.101 chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
What happened to the patient? I'm scared to ask. ;)
Plandapattipus chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Hehe, probably a lil late to review this, but i just had to. This is like the best smut filled story ever. I swear. Oh my god I feel like such a pervert. _ You're an awesome writer!
issacrocks chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
"hope everyone will still talk to me after this".

No worries, everyone needs a little smut now and then )

Although, I AM finding it hard to believe it was dirtier first time around...
purplecat95 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Hooooly Gawd! This stuff is like... liquid porn! I loved it! XDXDXD PLUS! It was well written too! :3
xXGallifreyFallsNoMoreXx chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
OMFG. This Story is phenomenal. A excellent work of art that rivals the Harry Potter series (Maybe this story is better)I don't know how many times I've read this story. probably more than 10 times... Keep up the good work,

Azarox
ammtheman chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
i have read your story about 5 times now so i think you should make another story like this

azarocks if you can borrow some of his ideas becuase hel be making a story like .im a close friend to aza rocks.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
didnt think there was going to be a fanfiction story like this and i think you over did it a bit but still,great story.
sanninlurkshere13 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This is asenath fron DA and i must say amaizing work you did here is totally perfect and i just love it, is so full of lurve and is beautifull at the same time, mostly the ending i just loved the ending.
Unedited Creativity chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
You have a real talent and this deliciously dirty story is proof. And to be honest I sort of imagine that the sex Derek and Angie would have would be very... intense. Maybe it's just me but some how I see them doing bad things in his office during late hours. Ha-ha! What I mean to say is I felt this actually reflected my view of the couple. A strange raw intensity and lust mixed with deeply felt love and devotion. (I mean come on. If the scenes weren't simply character pictures with text we would have seen Derek checkin' that fine booty more than once. Am I right or am I right? Ha!) Once again, fabulous work! You have my honest esteem.
CinnamonKiwis chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
hahaha this is effing awesome. :D

makes me want to draw fanart ;;
LittleMissStark chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
lol what happened with the surgery? haha id hate to be that guy
XxNahxbiosxX chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
uh, didn't they say they had to go to surgery in 20 min? 0.o
So Teeny chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
... Hot... that's really all I can say o.o *blink blink* As a serious yaoi fan XD I have to say that I've only had two or three hetero pairings in my life that I've loved to death, and Derek/Angie is one of them.

That was positively delicious, TC~
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