|Reviews for The Shadow of the Past|
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 16 . 3/3/2012
I only really like about three Zutara stories, this just added one more. (Personally, I usually read cannon pairings or friendship fics, but I'l take anything that's well written, as this is.)
I saw a few tense errors, but that's just my dyslexic Grammer Nazi coming through. I like how this is writtn.
| Anony-mouse chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Whoa. I absolutely love your take on the modernized... well everything. (but silly me, i forgot this was AU and was wondering what the heck Zuko was doing with a baseball bat)Can't wait to see how the rest of this goes!
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 16 . 2/7/2011
Aww... it is over. I loved reading this. Thank you so much for writing it.
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 15 . 2/7/2011
What did Azula do to Zuko to make him say "Please don't hurt me,"?
Thank you so much for write this, I love it.
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 6 . 2/7/2011
Ozai is creepy, checking out a girl a little older than his daughter, eww. Hokada should've noticed and decked him, now that would be funny.
Thank you for writing this.
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Iroh would win at chess. Ozai or someone working for him was driving the sudan, maybe Long Fei or Zhoa.
This is really good thank you for writing it.
| Shyrean chapter 16 . 10/23/2010
Thanks for sharing your fantasy, it was rather thrilling ride.
| Person chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
OMG! THIS IS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! Read all the chapters in one straight sitting! Yes, you got me hooked! AND you managed to turn me in from a Maiko fan to a Zutara fan! You're really good at creating suspense and tension. Really great work! :))
| NorthernLights25 chapter 16 . 9/7/2010
I am sad this story is over!
| pika.pikante chapter 16 . 9/7/2010
i love this story. :)
but, i was kinda disappointed when...
i didn't want it to end. D:
| AnnaAza chapter 16 . 9/7/2010
I seriously love this story! My favorite was when Katara went to talk to Zuko; it was very sweet and you described their characters perfectly!
| Inertia 2.0 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
The 1st chap was good, but, you could have had Zuko have a bandage on his scar, it was too fast and the burn should have healed for weeks. Still, I'm hooked! Good work!
| hypercell chapter 15 . 5/7/2010
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
| Khenstrial chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Love the story so far, really want to know how it ends, please update soon!
| kUgi-jeL chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
Hurry and update! :)