Reviews for Disappearing
CerenbusSnapeMalfoy chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
this is damn good. write more.
Exploading albino potato chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
That's a good reason to have to leave whammy's
LittleBirdSoarsOverEagle chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Wow this one is good too! Love your stories!
Mitsukari-senpai chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
D'aww, I want more! I want to know what changes after this event! I want to know how their future turns out after this...

Poor Near, but this story you made is interesting. :D
KittyKatPeterson chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
disseapeard huh?... dont you wish you could just disseapear for a week... a month...

hmmm...

I loved this ff also and Im looking forward to the next perverted rape ff that you might have out next :) Ill look in whenever I remember to :)

KittyKatPeterson
TheLegacyLives chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
my gosh...I think you should continue this fic to show how rape can effect people , even unemotional people like Near
xPrincessKagurax chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
aww
Ai Enma chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
there is no love :(

My Near T.T
call-me-H chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
...woah... normally i hate near and workship mello,

but when i readed your fic...i felt completly the opposite!

and it takes a LOT to let me say : 'poor near' but THIS really did it...

poor near...

GOOD JOB!
Bitch'spet chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Btich i think you might now who this is my user name is Bitch'spet... ;) yeah. that was interesting i can't write a story for two days! Wah! TT_TT. and way that..Grawr mello's a chocolate obsessed bitch who has nothing better to do than to torment people in several different ways!

Love.

Pet

p.s. that was extremely kinky. :)
MissPumpkinHead chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Ahh! Mello is crazy! I'm scared now too D:

I always hated Near but I felt bad for him in your story. Poor kid. Anyway, this is really good :) Much better than anything I could hope to do.
DoctorBanner chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I could definately see that being what happened just before he left. It just seems to fit his persona...
freak-joy-spastic chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
No my precious Near! Ok now that thats out of my system, That was a great(short)rape fic. I applod you. Much anime love ~bye bye~
feathersxblood chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I like it, bar the boxer instead of boxers, but I'm a nit-picker, I'm obsessed over grammar.

I like how you portray Mello, and really, it's very good!
Maria-Lilly Kon chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Good job :D other than this part here: “My I help you?” Near asked... It should be "May I" I don't see anything wrong wih it.