Reviews for What if I Do it Wrong?
austin chapter 1 . 3/27
I need to go to the bvathroom
Dramionelover394 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
God that was so sweet! It pissed me off that Ginny and Seamus were making fun of Neville for having never had sex or kissed anyone but her. Why the hell is it okay for a girl to be a virgin but not a guy? Why the double standard? I'm a friggin 17 girl and I've never been kissed, done anything remotely sexual with another person, or even had a boyfriend... why is that okay, but a 17 year old guy can't be in the same position? Ugh it really makes me hate people. I apologize for that rant but it's been on my mind for awhile.
meragogo24 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
omg that was wonderful and the last line just made me smile
anya chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
sexy! i love it it is good but you should be at least 13 to read!;)
highlyfunctioningmikyla chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Virgin!Neville is so cute! I just want to hug him! Well done
HarryyPotterrFF chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I agree with FrolickingToast, I feel as if it needed an epilogue of some sort. Otherwise, good smut, Luna was not OOC which is good.
BobtheFrog chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
AWWWWW! The last line killed me! Go Neville! I found it fascinating that you had Ginny and Seamus at the new and intriguing that they were hanging out the four of them together...I really really loved their dynamics together...they were still with their canon relationships but they were just hanging out...fantastic work here _
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Haha, very nice :)
Gohan91 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
i liked it :)
HannahLeigh123 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
loved it! :) perfectly in character!
ellygail chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Love love loved it! Luna was sooo in character.
Anju Luvs Bge chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
aww how sweet and a lil disturbing! lol i love it! hehe wat a fansty! :)) hehehehe keep going! :0
MissShrewd chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This is so good :D It's pretty classy.
ewriter chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Rileybby chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Great and Great.

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