Reviews for What if I Do it Wrong?
meragogo24 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
omg that was wonderful and the last line just made me smile
anya chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
sexy! i love it it is good but you should be at least 13 to read!;)
TheScaryLittleGhostGirl chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Virgin!Neville is so cute! I just want to hug him! Well done
HarryyPotterrFF chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I agree with FrolickingToast, I feel as if it needed an epilogue of some sort. Otherwise, good smut, Luna was not OOC which is good.
BobtheFrog chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
AWWWWW! The last line killed me! Go Neville! I found it fascinating that you had Ginny and Seamus at the beginning...so new and intriguing that they were hanging out the four of them together...I really really loved their dynamics together...they were still with their canon relationships but they were just hanging out...fantastic work here _
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Haha, very nice :)
Gohan91 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
i liked it :)
HannahLeigh123 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
loved it! :) perfectly in character!
ellygail chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Love love loved it! Luna was sooo in character.
Anju Luvs Bge chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
aww how sweet and a lil disturbing! lol i love it! hehe wat a fansty! :)) hehehehe keep going! :0
MissShrewd chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This is so good :D It's pretty classy.
ewriter chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Lovely!
Rileybby chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Great and Great.

:)
xHearMyHowlx chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Oh, don't you just LOVE them together? *sigh*

Great. I loved it! :D
CaryFairy chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
That was awesome! And as always, glad to see people practicing safe sex!
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