Reviews for Rising Sunset
Guest chapter 11 . 11/23/2013
Oh please oh please finish it
mintgil chapter 11 . 6/13/2011
that was great . can't wait for the next chapter
vixenjc chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
hi i think you got edwards age wrong is he not 109
Rose Demica chapter 11 . 2/25/2010
AWESOME! Loved it, can't wait for more.
MoustahcesAndPistachios chapter 11 . 1/17/2010
OME! i loved it :)
Purely Fictional chapter 11 . 6/30/2009
hey, i love the title. it was well writen and i really liked the way you portrayed the characters. 212341/10
Death By Insanity chapter 11 . 6/10/2009
haha. i love it. please try to update soon or did you quite on this story?
1 Twilighter chapter 11 . 5/29/2009
LOLz!

conitnue its funny, and for the changing the rating thing, Go for it!

this story would be good M rated.

please continue,

love,

1 Twilighter
Honey Beaver chapter 11 . 5/22/2009
good story, update soon
twiliteroxuresox chapter 11 . 4/10/2009
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! plze plze plze update soon ]
Pflow chapter 11 . 3/14/2009
this story is very entertaining, one of the better post breaking dawn stories i have read. I hope you continue. I can't wait to read more! :)
Rehtona chapter 3 . 3/3/2009
Hey, your story's good so far.. but you really don't have Bella's personality. you make her look really stuck up, and she doesn't have thoughts like .. "That ought to show her who’s boss or rather, who’s wife! Hmph! Take that!" it's more like "even after all this time, i still can't believe that Edward chose me.." she's really doubtful of herself, and believes that Edward can do better. I'm not saying your writing's bad, just that i don't think you really captured who Bella is.. it's like you put in a whole other person. but keep writing and have fun with it.
12345jj chapter 11 . 2/12/2009
oops... haha that Tracey is such a slut! urg
mello-ello chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
luv your story when are you going to update soon i hope!
twilightluver123987 chapter 11 . 1/31/2009
can't wait for next chapter
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