Good ending. Not sure what else to say. Good story, nice ending.

I guess I have a gripe with Sesshomaru telling Kagome where she can and can’t go, still, although I guess if he’ll be in danger of transforming into a feral beast if she happened to go through the well, then I can see why he would be resistent to let her do so… But still. I guess I don’t care for that.

Other than that, it’s difficult to say anything bad about this story. It seems well organized. The characters seem pretty well in character. It’s entertaining. The idea was interesting. It flowed well and was not overly verbose (imo). There’s consistency. It’s checking all the boxes I can think of, personally. A good read, would recommend.

It does make me wonder where the line is crossed from Teen into Mature rating, though.

Nice. I really liked this chapter. Everything is getting tied up nicely.

It’s nice to see Sesshomaru have some vulnerability with Kagome. I’m not happy for InuYasha, though, so I hope everything can get kind of resolved. It’s a very interesting read, though.

I'm really curious what Sesshomaru is doing in 500 years. _'

I'm starting to get bothered at Sesshomaru's lack of accountability. He kills Kikyo like it's nothing. Kagome is sad, and yet... not angry. I think she would be angry at him for doing whatever he likes regardless of who is hurt by it.

Eek! This is exciting. _

Nice cliff-hanger there. This is such a good story. I'm enjoying it thoroughly.

What is love? Baby don't hurt me. _ This chapter was nice. It's nice to see Sesshomaru having *le gasp* feelings.

I LOVE how well you write all the character interactions. I'm sitting here shipping Sango and InuYasha XD and loving the interactions between InuYasha and Kagome as well. I feel that everyone is so in character, and it's really fun to see.

The only thing that feels off to me is, unfortunately, the interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome. I love SessKag, but I think it's a very difficult pair to write for a lot of reasons. Overall, I like this story because it's not making excuses for how Sesshomaru is acting. But I think he actually wouldn't have treated Kagome that way at this point in the series. I think he actually respected Kagome a little bit at this point in time. Or maybe that's my wishful thinking.

This story was absolutely impressive. Loved every moment of it. Thank you so much.

LC Rose, love love love. This was such a fun and interesting story. I came across it looking for great Sesshomaru and Kagome fanfics. Seriously after the Yashahime scandal I think many of us who followed the Inuyasha series when it aired ran back to the fanfic world haha.

I am late in the discovery of this story but really hope you continue to write about Sesshomaru and Kagome. The great character writers like yourself need to keep the torch alive for the rest of the fandom.

Omg, I love this chapter. It’s so beautifully written.

I'm not sure but even when they did try to make things right for inuyasha after they did something so stupid like trusting a mean spirited foe...they did get what they deserved as punishment for what they did ...sango and miroku did see so much wrong and k in how this monk monster is and thinks and they where warned by kikyo ...that they kill the mike too as she was touched by demon...how did they think that they will be not killed to..? They all know demon and are friends and with this they are trained for this crazy monk and need to be killed too...

Hope when sesshomaru bonds with kagome more that the tie holding inuyasha in place is broken and that he takes down this dark Tempel and the minions and monk and safes his pack.

“Of HER daiyoukai”

The suspense is killing me.

Damn. Amazing chapter. Someone’s catching feelings.