Reviews for Halloween Horror
Julchen1515 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I like it
backtosmith chapter 7 . 9/7/2010
Hi there, I feel it's neccessary for somebody (me)to point out that you are a terrible writer, because noneof the other people who reviewed this did as such. And so, you need to work on your grammar, capitalization and punctuation, as well as detail. This story was lacking SO much detail, and did not portray the characters' emotions properly at all. Props for trying, but you came up short. Work harder and try again.
twilightnaley19 chapter 7 . 10/1/2008
AWESOME ENDING. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
can'tgetenoughof23 chapter 7 . 9/27/2008
well I'm glad it was just a dream.
can'tgetenoughof23 chapter 6 . 9/15/2008
whatever you do please don't kill Nathan he is just to fine to die!1
twilightnaley19 chapter 6 . 9/15/2008
WTF? WILL THERE BE ANY SURVIVORS OR ARE THEY ALL GOING TO DIE? THOSE PEOPLE ARE CREEPY WHO ARE DOING THAT. UPDATE SOON!
twilightnaley19 chapter 5 . 9/10/2008
OMG! PLEASE TELL ME THAT HALEY ISNT DEAD. WHO IS THE PERSON THAT IS DOING THAT? UPDATE SOON!
1treehillcharmed chapter 2 . 9/9/2008
nice attempt but you really need to work on your grammar
Stepheyy chapter 4 . 9/9/2008
awesomeness.
Stepheyy chapter 5 . 9/9/2008
intrsting...SO Whos'left?
twilightnaley19 chapter 4 . 9/7/2008
LOVED THIS CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!
twilightnaley19 chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
LOVED THIS CHAPTER. YOU HAVE SOME GRAMMAR MISTAKES BUT ITS GOOD. I LIKE THIS STORY. WHO IS THE PERSON IN THE SCHOOL AND WHO IS DOING THAT TO THEM? WHO ARE THE COUPLES IN THIS STORY? UPDATE SOON!
twilightnaley19 chapter 2 . 9/5/2008
I DONT KNOW IF I'M LIKING THIS WHOLE BROOKE AND NATHAN. WILL THEY BE TOGETHER IN THIS? LOVED THIS CHAPTER.
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
LOVED THIS FIRST CHAPTER.