Reviews for A Breath of One's Own
Dennis chapter 1 . 3/18
I so want more! Beautiful start.
thehopefulone chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Awwww...that's was beautiful.
Closet.Poet.13 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
very sweet. i like it
Athyna DaughterofPosiedon chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Aww. Everyone seems to be getting them so very perfectly. I love it.
LiquidV chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Love the sweet sadness of this story. :)
elfspirit7 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
AWEOMSE! Thanks for the awesome read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!
Angoisse chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
This is wonderful - very simple and sweet.

Just one thing to mention (because I have issues like this): in the sentence "Temperance had always left her room to breath", it should be "breathe" because it's being used as a verb, not a noun. Laugh at my nitpickiness if you wish, but I thought you should know.
ValaMagic chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Aaw, cute ending
Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
aw so cute, well done!
kaitebug chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
nice
Finalhybrid chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Such a wonderful story. I love the way you capture the characters. Hope you keep writing more for this pairing.
PandorasTube chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
This was nice please update, i like the way you wrote this, nice and smooth and flawless haha XD
Marish89 chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Love the fic - please write more!
DrTBrennan chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
It was interesting...

There was an obvious mistake though.

"“Yep,” Temperance says cheerfully as she slides into bed with Temperance."

You can't have two Temperances.

Sarah
Stephy Newton chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Aw. It's so cute.