|Reviews for Two Immortals, One Bride|
| SnapeFanatic1 chapter 13 . 10/6/2016
Very interesting and fun story! Glad I stumbled upon it
| Rising Phoenix-82 chapter 13 . 10/3/2012
It ended wonderfully, keep me informed of the next one...
| deathgeonous chapter 13 . 9/3/2012
Cute fic. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
| HaljaN chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
I like it :D
| Codename-Rebecca.Page chapter 13 . 12/29/2009
love it so cute though the potion thing threw me off for a while. though considering it's been a while since i read the last couple of chapters might explain if i'm for getting something.
| Rowan Aubrey Annabelle Declan chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
this is rteally good
| Laihi chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
First, thanks to everybody that reviewed!
Second, DestinChild had a question about what happened at the end:
I loved this story. Great job. I hope that you write a sequel. Just one question. at the end of this chapter it says that there was a loud shriek from outside the castle, Jareth shouting and Selene laughing. Can you explain what was going on I got a little lost. But other then that, great job.
What happened was that after Selene and Jareth made their little bet about whether Sarah would try to rip Jareth's head off because he gave Selene a potion that would cause her to become pregnant, Selene told Sarah. Sarah shrieked and tried to literally rip Jareth's head off, at which he shouted and Selene started laughing because she won the bet...
Now, I am considering a sequel, but am trying to figure out how to bring three different movies into one story...I pretty much got it figured out, but i need to work out the finer details. Watch for it, because i'll hopefully have the first chapter up in a week or two. Til then, check put my other stories and rate and review!
| TinkLuvr16 chapter 13 . 6/30/2009
LOVE IT! i cant wait to see if theres a sequel
| DestinChild chapter 13 . 6/29/2009
I loved this story. Great job. I hope that you write a sequel. Just one question. at the end of this chapter it says that there was a loud shriek from outside the castle, Jareth shouting and Selene laughing. Can you explain what was going on I got a little lost. But other then that, great job
| Dagger Kitsune chapter 13 . 6/28/2009
A wonderful story and ending. The bets the end made me laugh.
Thanks for an awesome read.
| TinkLuvr16 chapter 12 . 6/18/2009
LOVE IT! cant wait for more
| TinkLuvr16 chapter 11 . 5/9/2009
| Charlie Drear chapter 11 . 5/8/2009
can't wait to read more. update soon.
| SailorNova007 chapter 11 . 5/8/2009
this is great please update soon aqain
| Hennesey chapter 10 . 3/27/2009
Please Write Soon