|Reviews for Silent Orchestra|
| Own.Little.World chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Omg I could have cried! That was soo good! You should write MOore!
| Seldavia chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Dude, I know exactly what pic you're talking about. Unfortunately, I was expecting it to end the same way, so I was kind of thrown. XD
Overall a good short story, though I will point out just a few minor things:
-I don't recall Ganondorf ever using a bow and arrows.
-It struck me as a bit foolish of Ganondorf to knock Link out and not kill him.
-I've never heard of anyone committing suicide via bow and arrows before. I don't think it would work.
-You need to have more paragraph breaks, there are huge blocks of text that seem to run together.
| Lady.Zayriah chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Aw, that was really sad. It has made me want to cry now. It was very well written, but it makes me want to cry. I suppose if it does that then you have surely done your job as an author.