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![]() ![]() ![]() nice job so far! plz rite the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the new chapter. I hope we see some BM/WW scenes in the next chapter. I also wanted to say, that the part with flash doesnt work. Maybe you try to build some funny elements with him but i dont like it. The chapter ist great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. I'll be waiting for the next one! *stares at computer screen* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh sweet... some of Bruce's best moment :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its good! Incorporating some of the new batman movie and some JLU (animation) and comic universe. I hope that Diana will be integral in getting the Dark Knight back. I'm a BMWW shipper after all. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry but this wasn't my favorite chapter. It seemed a bit rushed and I really wanted the memories of what happened in The Dark Knight to be revealed in Bruce's head, with all the league members finding out. It would help explain all the sad and tragic stuff and Rachel's feelings. Flash was funny as usual though. The talk about gorillas and splitting up was incredibly funny. I like how you told us what was happening in the next chapter. It helps ease the horrid suspense. I'll await the next chapter and hope it is fantastic as the usual. Update very very very very very SOON! P.S. Sorry but here's another complaint. I feel as if all the other girls Bruce has been with are portrayed as just bimbos because you call them lucky and stuff. It seems like they don't really matter at all. I know this is BMWW, but I'm also BatCat and Bruce/Rachel pairings. The way Cassie recalls them is as if they are very unimportant. Even if they aren't his true lovers(I think Rachel or Selina is his true love even though I like BMWW), I really wanted Rachel to be portrayed I think you should at least go back to the party scene with the Joker and Bat's first real meeting in person. If you want to get me really happy, I hope you do the whole The Dark Knight shinanigan. It'd be more emotional and deep to get all the league's reactions. It may seem like you're just repeating the events of the movie, but it's totally different with commentary from the BatClan and J League. I know, I'm a sucker for romance tragedies. Sorry, but that's just the way I am. I still I don't know why I feel this way about the chat about the five lucky girls, but it's just a certain vibe I'm getting from the conversation that Cassie has with Diana. Maybe Cassie is supposed to sound that way, but I just don't like it. Sorry but that's just how I feel about it. Again update, maybe to make me love this story again. I still do love it, but this chapter was kind of a letdown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hum, does Cassie have some sort of talent? Anyway, great as ever By the way, if you want more review, you should go in your profil to let those who don't have an account on ff write a review. For the moment, it's just the guys of ff that can write review |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! No one's ever thanked me before! *sniff sniff* Keep up the good work! can't wait for the next chapter! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() one word... AWESOME! the story line and descriptions are great! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoho! I've been waiting a long time. Thank you for updating. I was kind of mad about the long wait, but this chapter cheered me up. I loved this. The memories are building up and with each one of them is the League and BatClan's knowledge and knowings of Bruce Wayne behind the mask. I still love the Batman Begins crossovers. They're great! I also can't wait to find out how the Joker is alive. For a second when it went to Martha's garden I almost thought you were already ending the story with the Wayne murder. I was terrified and angry, but boy am I glad you didn't. It really scared me for a second there. I like how you revealed Bruce's smartness even as I child. That was cool. I always thought he was pretty smart as a kid too. I hope you can have a The Dark Knight crossover. I want the J-League and BatClan to see all the events that happen with the Joker in The Dark Knight even maybe you could change the story a little so Dent is still alive(depending on whether he is dead or alive in the movie or not...). I hope now questions are left unanswered so that's why I want them to know about Rachel Dawes. It would help them understand Bruce's hate for the Joker and get into the twisted mind of the Joker more. Well that's all I have to say. I hope there's way more memories to come 'cause this is the best story ever! Update very very very very very very SOON! P.S. I liked the added touch of a father-son relationship between Bats and his partners in the memory of OUR FAMILY MEMORIES. It was a nice touch. Oh, and UPDATE IMMEDIATELY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry about your finger. XD And poor Tim. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy... now that was intense XD The only thing I noticed was the end. The listing didn't really flow so well. You maybe should've had J'nn feel their emotions or something, not switching perspectives so much.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Tim! I feel so sorry for him! But he was very brave! *sob* |
![]() ![]() ![]() bats is gonna be so pissed when he finds out they all went in his mind. this is very good please update soon. |