Aww, that was very sad. But nicely done. And I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure (and I hope) that everything will be ok in the end. With a lot of BMWW added for good measure. :)

10/10!

Neat idea. Looking forward to more.

That's so sad... Bruce is half-dead, everyone that knows him in the Bat sense is not the same, not even Wally. At least HE remembered the joy of eating a hamburger. It must've surprised John when Wally just mumbled, "No, thanks...". And Clark Kent crying? You HAVE to continue. I cannot emphasize that enough. You HAVE to!

Aw... Bruce looks in pretty bad shape...

Hi!

I liked the BMWW scene. It was sweet. D

Hopefully we get to see more of Diana dismantling the walls between them.

10/10 D

This chapter was kind of depressing but that's okay 'cause it was great! I looked at your explanation on why you like Batman like you told me there was on there and I found a spoiler for your story on there about J'onn's greatest fear. If you plan on the original league members entering Batman's mind to find out more about him this is going to be a fantastic story. What other way is there to fix the toxin affecting him? If you do another way it's still going to be great 'cause you're a fantastic writer. Update very very very SOON! P.S. I luv Clark crying. No offense to Superman luvrs but the guy's too gentle-hearted, honest, and nice. He's a wimp. Everybody luvs the bad boys like the tall, dark, and handsome Bats. Christian Bale looks hot as Batman ;). Oh and Batman is the determined, stubborn, self-righteous, straight-to-the-point guy that makes us love him. He rocks! Well adios everyone! UPDATE!

I thought this story was a little difficult to read because it's almost entirely dialogue-driven. It's maybe a little too fast-paced that way. If there was less dialogue and more explanation, it might work better.

Also, there's a typo in the title. It should be "Far TOO Many Scars". It's a really interesting plot you have though, so don't let this review stop you.

DUDE

YOU HURT HIM

well not you but you did that crane hurt him

but yeah it was a surprise that alfred yelled

he never does

he is always in his english pasive voice

they are going to get an eye on nightwing

im sure he will go nuts kicking any butts that he can find

hell he will kick his own butt if there is no one to kick

plz updates this soon

later

Please update soon! And it WAS kind of depressing, but I love this story and I REALLY, REALLY want to read more! PLEASE UPDATE!

WOW! Great story!

Poor Batman! Poor Superman! Poor dick! POOR EVERYONE!

Keep up the good work! I'm really enjoying it!

Whoo! Great story. I too love the Batman as my favorite super hero. He's the best hero ever ;). I like how it's centered around Batman well because I love him. Please update very very very SOON! You gave us a big cliffy! What' going to happen! You also managed to put in great humor too especially with the part about nobody reading the whatever so they didn't get what was going on when the number alerted at the watchtower. The part where Zatana said the world was in danger 'cause Batman was injured was total awesomeness and the yelling that happened before she said that and after was really funny especially with the part about Shayeara sticking her mace up blank but never being able to continue because of another hero going 'jeesh'. Pure gold. UPDATE! IMMEDIATELY! Just in case you didn't know, Batman's my FAVORITE super hero. He's the best so keep it centered on him. That's perfectly fine with me!

Awesome chapter! I'm a bit confused as to what happened and the chapter seemed a little rushed. It would have been better if you divided this into several chapter...

Nice beginning though! :) Can't wait for the rest!

P.S

If you need any help, don't hesitate to ask :)

this story is awsome! One of the best i've ever read! Keep up the good work :)