Reviews for The Final Sunset
Jazzybella chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Ugh so not right. Beautifully written, but NOOOOOO, Yumi can't die. These two can't be without each other. So sad.
St. Harridan chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This was, to me, bittersweet and horrific at the same time. A short but fantastic piece, I have to say. I love how you paid attention to the depth of their friendship, and how they seemed to understand each other in just a few words.
LlafApplez chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
I did have to read that a few times through before... *sob* getting *sob* it that my *sniffle* Yumichika *sob* was the one who *sniffle* PASSED ON! T0T

Nice work anyway Short and simple, yet full of feeling.
Suicide In A Bottle chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
poor Ikkaku and Yumichika. :(
Kachanski chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
aww this is so sad, and beautifully written.
Ushinatta chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
So sad...Made me cry.
Psycho-Neurotically Disturbed chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
I had to read this one a few times. It was simple, elegant and a very nice read. I think you do a great job showing just how serious this is with Yumichika's secret smile and the way Ikkaku actually notices it. The simplicity of the words is sweet, but sad. I loved it. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.

Ayuki Ame chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Mou How dare you kill Yumichika

*Goes on rage*

Vanessa chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Oh! I get it! Aw how sad, Ikkaku's talking and then suddenly Yumi dies...

But Its kewl...
Renji's Girll chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
So, who's going to off Yumichika? Or did I not read this right?