Reviews for Illuminated
Nix Ginevra Black chapter 2 . 11/8/2023
Here reading in 2023 and this is just such a perfect, perfect complement to Blindsided.

I've loved Blindsided all these years and now I love Illuminated.

Thank you so much
XioMama chapter 3 . 9/5/2023
OMG this story is such a gift! I was smitten with Blindsided, of course, and although it hurt I understood why you were keeping it a one shot. But then this! *fights back tears*
Soa chapter 3 . 7/15/2023
…He may have already considered their future together.

Chef’s kiss. ️
Aai chapter 1 . 7/15/2023
Oh this is iust brillant! ️
Alice1420 chapter 3 . 4/23/2023
Muy bueno
Kitchen Table chapter 3 . 2/19/2023
Your Author's Note at chapter 1 was (perhaps unintentionally) hilarious, especially the phrase "writing borderline porn on a work computer". So I was laughing before I even started the story proper, which is impressive.
Since Hermione didn't officially get a rejection, I was hoping there would suddenly be two internships available and she could get one too, though I know that's a bit deux ex machina.
Greatly enjoyed the visualization of the three headed monster and diving off a cliff into a waterfall.
Felt deeply concerned at no mention of contraceptive charms/potions. Unplanned pregnancies are a stressful time and can screw (lol) up life plans. I fear for the characters.
Extremely glad Draco did oral and it was noted that it takes quite a while. All the better to show his love, and give Hermione some very well-deserved pleasure.
Aw, poor Minney. I'm glad Hermione cottoned on fast to her distress and didn't make it worse. It was a subtle and kind thing for Draco to do for Hermione.
Glad Draco's breaking away from his family. (Character development and budgeting plans in a 3-chapter fic outside the main plot?! Lovely. Thank you.)
Enjoyed Hermione's stuttered speech/apology about what happened at the lake. Many authors cut those off only a few words or a sentence in, but I'm *invested*, dang it, in the whole structured apology and suggested next steps, especially if a character put lots of effort into writing it. So I'm glad you wrote that out.
Excellent detail tying the previously-mentioned whiskey to the fake love potion. I had figured it was a fake, but I thought it might be peppermint syrup or something. Have you considered writing mysteries?
Thank you so much for writing. I felt happy reading it!
Amberlina0418 chapter 3 . 2/9/2022
love it! ahh the ending lol!
aerolithos chapter 3 . 10/20/2021
haha this was so funny and witty!
lydiamalfoy chapter 3 . 9/21/2021
It’s a lovely story and I crave more!
Serennos chapter 3 . 8/9/2021
Very entertaining...
Isabella chapter 3 . 7/27/2021
I suspected there wasn't any "love potion" but I never thought it was the whiskey he traded from the first year Slytherin's. I'm really happy for the sequel and I really enjoyed it.
Anonymous chapter 3 . 7/23/2021
I felt like he just signed his death warrant
Rue91 chapter 3 . 7/18/2021 Malfoy hahahaha
whyareyoulookingatthis chapter 3 . 6/23/2021
thank goodness for this sequel. it is amazingly cute with right amounts of everything.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2021
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