|Reviews for Not to Be|
| erianair chapter 2 . 1/6/2009
This is pretty good. I'd love to know more about Dray, and of course, why she was attacked. Please keep writing!
| Suadela chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Well, this is a very suspenseful update. Normally I don’t care for stories written in present tense but this one I’ll make an exception and I'm eager to see what follows this.
I did find three typos that you might want to look at.
“I’m to numb to scream…” - I think you meant to put “too” instead of “to”.
“There life is spread across this floor…” – “There” should be “Their”. Yeah, the three there’s get confusing. There – a place. Their – possession in the plural. They’re – They are.
“Swimming threw an ocean my ears clogged from the…” – “Swimming through and ocean, my ears clogged from the…”.
Other than that, I think you did a wonderful job and please update soon!
| Sarah chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I enjoyed it. It was good for the chapter.
| Redjackpirate chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Heyll yeah-for other Supernatural obsessors! : D ...I klike this-continue...I'll write a better review later-for next chapter!...But yeah-keep it up1 -JAc