Reviews for Take Two
real life sucks chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I wanted to cry when I was reading Touku and Koukuyo's part.
FrictionX42 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Those are some good backgrounds for a story. Could be interesting to see it one day if you decide to go for it.
knightlygirl chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
aww... poor koukuyo... you could make a hole story out of this (though with the multiple ocs, id probably get sick of it fairly soon cause eventually youd only refer to them by their given name and then id forget who's whom's child but oh well)

interesting idea with kiba tenten. idont think ive ever seen that before. same with the shino (is he still at oc level 8?)and hana/

but at any rate, god story,


knightlygirl aka becca
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
ClockRepair chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Oh wow, the parts about Sasuke's kids are so depressing!

But the explanation that I love the most is Ino's kid because he works in the flower shop and always had a rose to randomly whip out. That was really funny!
Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Nice. Who is the father of Inoue, the mother of Chouno, the mother of Hizashi and Himawari and the mother of Touku and Koukuyo? Keep on writing!
Ophelia Hall chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
awesome!Please write another chapter!
kodes chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
aw thats sweet. but whos the father for ino and the mother for chouji?
hakuisagirl chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
i love these characters.

i cant wait to see them interact

and forn genin teams.

way to go!