|Reviews for Zatch Bell 3001: The Boy with the White Book|
| lieutenant spark chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
hey my momodo is a linkist and if you dont know what that means well think kalulu except this time when y momodos spell is read she turns into link form legend of zelda also she has brown hair with blonde streaks and she semi pointy ears and she dosent talk she just makes sounds and facial expressions all the time she is gashs brother
| Vstriker chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I know i may be a little late but my mamodo is
Appearance: Black light skin boy with messy black hair, Glasses, Black Jeans, and a brown Jersey.(hates wearing shoes.)
Personality: Lazy but very smart. He hates any form of work and loves to play chess. He has little friends except for his mamodo. He is very kind despite his constant mocking.
Book color: Dark brown
Appearance: Guinea pig. Dark brown fur.
Personality: As lazy as his master but will lay down his life to protect Vincent. He can often be found laying on Vincent's shoulder or head. He has the ability to sniff out and hear other mamodo.
| wingedwolfgirl chapter 9 . 1/13/2009
THAT WAS INSANE
| Unicron Risen chapter 26 . 1/11/2009
Wow, this is getting good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
| wingedwolfgirl chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
that was so cool! I really liked how the bullet just bounced off. PING!
| HaseoSkeith chapter 25 . 1/4/2009
I was glad to be of some assisstance.
| Apprentice Writer chapter 25 . 1/4/2009
It always makes me sad to know one of my characters had her book burn, and I never got to see her. Oh well.
| HaseoSkeith chapter 23 . 1/3/2009
Two new mamodos at your service.
Appearence: Human boy, pale skin, blue eyes, and crystal
coloured hair. Wears jeans, light blue shirt and
Personality: Furi is cold, calm and extremely cautious. He
doesn't trust anyone except his book keeper.
Book Colour: Light blue
Appearence: Young girl, red hair, and hazel eyes. Wears a
blue dress with a large white sash over her
Personality: Extremely loyal to Furi. Will only do what Furi
Spells: Izor- shoots icicles from hands.
Freedo- cold breath that freezes anything.
Froshield- encases himself in a protective, moveable
Izbal- creates a blade of ice.
Isic- crates a scythe made of ice, causes blizzards
Izorga- shoots one large Icicle.
Tero Izor- freezes all terrain in a certain area.
Dioga Izo[ultimate]- creates a large wolf made of
Ice. Anything touches will be
Appearence: Human girl, purple hair and green eyes. Wears a
dark green jacket and dark green skirt and brown
Personality: Really annoying , she always making fun of
everyone. She doesn't care about anytihng other
than making herself happy.
Book Colour: Grey
Appearence: Middle-aged man with black hairand one black eye.
He wears an eyepatch over his right eye. A black
trench coat, brown shirt and pants, and a top-hat.
Personality: Doesn't usually want to fight but he will do
anything to make Kasumi happy
Spells: Misage- creates a field of mist.
Illumis- creates illusionsout of mist.
Illumaga- creates physical illusions.
Trimis- creates a spear that can't be broken.
Misu- creates a copy made from mist to absorb all
Gigano Misage- creates a large area of mist that only
Kasumi can see through.
Tero Maga Miga- creates a large snake of mist.
| HaseoSkeith chapter 24 . 1/3/2009
Thanks for putting Kaen in your story. Good way to end the chapter.
| Tsukiyomaru chapter 3 . 1/1/2009
Honestly I really like this story. I realize I'm only on chapter three but constructive critiscism is still useful. For one I believe you should try adding more detail. For one you're not giving much detail on how everyone looks. I like to know what the characters look like to help visualize what I'm reading. Aside from that I really do like this story and I'm sure it will be good.
| Tsukiyomaru chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Nice start. I'm intrigude already and I can tell I'll enjoy reading this story. Are you still looking for characters for the story?
| Unicron Risen chapter 22 . 12/13/2008
I forgot to mention, but you got Mila and Vin's personalities nailed in your last chapter. This chapter was intresting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
| HaseoSkeith chapter 11 . 11/24/2008
Appearence: Human boy, tanned skin, black hair and red eyes.
Wears a baseball cap, red shirt, black shorts and
Personality: Kaen is very cheery but also very stubborn. He
has a large appetite(can eat an entire grocery
store in a day and still be hungry). If anyone
tries to hurt someone he likes he will go all
out to stop them, even at the risk of being
Book Color: Reddish-orange
Appearence: Teenager with blonde hair and brown eyes. He wears
a red vest, white t-shirt and jeans.
Personality: Helpful, doesn't like seeing people suffer, will
whatever he can to help.
Spells: Firu- Breathes fire
Mirago- Creates multiple mirages of Kaen to confuse
Firuk- Flames suround Kaen.
Gigano Firu- Shoots large fireball from mouth.
Fashield- A shield of fire appears in front of Kaen.
Fitapa- Raises temperature in an area to extremely
Dioga Firuga[ultimate]- Creates a dragon made of fire.
| HaseoSkeith chapter 10 . 11/24/2008
I just recently started reading and I think that the story is very interesting.
| Unicron Risen chapter 21 . 11/21/2008
Thanks for puting Mila and Vinderlind in! -