Reviews for Zatch Bell 3001: The Boy with the White Book
lieutenant spark chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
hey my momodo is a linkist and if you dont know what that means well think kalulu except this time when y momodos spell is read she turns into link form legend of zelda also she has brown hair with blonde streaks and she semi pointy ears and she dosent talk she just makes sounds and facial expressions all the time she is gashs brother
Vstriker chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I know i may be a little late but my mamodo is

Name: Vincent

Age: 16

Appearance: Black light skin boy with messy black hair, Glasses, Black Jeans, and a brown Jersey.(hates wearing shoes.)

Personality: Lazy but very smart. He hates any form of work and loves to play chess. He has little friends except for his mamodo. He is very kind despite his constant mocking.

Book color: Dark brown

Partner: Cj

Appearance: Guinea pig. Dark brown fur.

Personality: As lazy as his master but will lay down his life to protect Vincent. He can often be found laying on Vincent's shoulder or head. He has the ability to sniff out and hear other mamodo.

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wingedwolfgirl chapter 9 . 1/13/2009
THAT WAS INSANE
Unicron Risen chapter 26 . 1/11/2009
Wow, this is getting good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
wingedwolfgirl chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
that was so cool! I really liked how the bullet just bounced off. PING!
HaseoSkeith chapter 25 . 1/4/2009
I was glad to be of some assisstance.
Apprentice Writer chapter 25 . 1/4/2009
It always makes me sad to know one of my characters had her book burn, and I never got to see her. Oh well.
HaseoSkeith chapter 23 . 1/3/2009
Two new mamodos at your service.

#1

Name: Furi

Age: 17

Appearence: Human boy, pale skin, blue eyes, and crystal

coloured hair. Wears jeans, light blue shirt and

white shoes.

Personality: Furi is cold, calm and extremely cautious. He

doesn't trust anyone except his book keeper.

Book Colour: Light blue

Partner: Mary

Appearence: Young girl, red hair, and hazel eyes. Wears a

blue dress with a large white sash over her

shoulder.

Personality: Extremely loyal to Furi. Will only do what Furi

asks.

Spells: Izor- shoots icicles from hands.

Freedo- cold breath that freezes anything.

Froshield- encases himself in a protective, moveable

sheild.

Izbal- creates a blade of ice.

Isic- crates a scythe made of ice, causes blizzards

when swung.

Izorga- shoots one large Icicle.

Tero Izor- freezes all terrain in a certain area.

Dioga Izo[ultimate]- creates a large wolf made of

Ice. Anything touches will be

frozen solid.

#2

Name: Kasumi

Age: 12

Appearence: Human girl, purple hair and green eyes. Wears a

dark green jacket and dark green skirt and brown

shoes.

Personality: Really annoying , she always making fun of

everyone. She doesn't care about anytihng other

than making herself happy.

Book Colour: Grey

Partner: Dave

Appearence: Middle-aged man with black hairand one black eye.

He wears an eyepatch over his right eye. A black

trench coat, brown shirt and pants, and a top-hat.

Personality: Doesn't usually want to fight but he will do

anything to make Kasumi happy

Spells: Misage- creates a field of mist.

Illumis- creates illusionsout of mist.

Illumaga- creates physical illusions.

Trimis- creates a spear that can't be broken.

Misu- creates a copy made from mist to absorb all

attacks.

Gigano Misage- creates a large area of mist that only

Kasumi can see through.

Tero Maga Miga- creates a large snake of mist.
HaseoSkeith chapter 24 . 1/3/2009
Thanks for putting Kaen in your story. Good way to end the chapter.
Tsukiyomaru chapter 3 . 1/1/2009
Honestly I really like this story. I realize I'm only on chapter three but constructive critiscism is still useful. For one I believe you should try adding more detail. For one you're not giving much detail on how everyone looks. I like to know what the characters look like to help visualize what I'm reading. Aside from that I really do like this story and I'm sure it will be good.
Tsukiyomaru chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Nice start. I'm intrigude already and I can tell I'll enjoy reading this story. Are you still looking for characters for the story?
Unicron Risen chapter 22 . 12/13/2008
I forgot to mention, but you got Mila and Vin's personalities nailed in your last chapter. This chapter was intresting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
HaseoSkeith chapter 11 . 11/24/2008
Name: Kaen

Age: 10

Appearence: Human boy, tanned skin, black hair and red eyes.

Wears a baseball cap, red shirt, black shorts and

black shoes.

Personality: Kaen is very cheery but also very stubborn. He

has a large appetite(can eat an entire grocery

store in a day and still be hungry). If anyone

tries to hurt someone he likes he will go all

out to stop them, even at the risk of being

severely hurt.

Book Color: Reddish-orange

Partner: Victor

Appearence: Teenager with blonde hair and brown eyes. He wears

a red vest, white t-shirt and jeans.

Personality: Helpful, doesn't like seeing people suffer, will

whatever he can to help.

Spells: Firu- Breathes fire

Mirago- Creates multiple mirages of Kaen to confuse

the enemy.

Firuk- Flames suround Kaen.

Gigano Firu- Shoots large fireball from mouth.

Fashield- A shield of fire appears in front of Kaen.

Fitapa- Raises temperature in an area to extremely

high levels.

Dioga Firuga[ultimate]- Creates a dragon made of fire.
HaseoSkeith chapter 10 . 11/24/2008
I just recently started reading and I think that the story is very interesting.
Unicron Risen chapter 21 . 11/21/2008
Thanks for puting Mila and Vinderlind in! -
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