Reviews for Having a Moment
XXXsmokweed4life420xxx chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Fic looks promising...
obsessivereader95 chapter 5 . 10/5/2011
awww! how sweet! i like seeing these little insights.
lpwriter4life chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
I love this fan fic; you're doing a great job with Raven and BB's POV! Update soon
Bwaga Bwaga BAM chapter 5 . 9/21/2011
Awsum sweet shippy galore! Such a nice addition to this fic of yours. Glad to know you are still out there :)
The Cretin chapter 3 . 9/19/2011
Great chap. I love how you handle BB. His inner thoughts are well written and realistic to his character. I really like how you've made him so much more then what many simply see. Keep rockin
Zanzibar Schlieffen III chapter 5 . 9/19/2011
Do my eyes deceive me? An update from one of the greatest fanfic writers in the TT fandom? Yes, verily!

This is fanfiction at its best! You are a writer with an astounding sense of subtlety. Overt shippiness is avoided and, in its place, is a touching caress of BBxRae sweetness. You have penetrated into the very heart and core of your subject matter.

WELCOME BACK!- Zanzibar Schlieffen III
Kryptocow chapter 5 . 9/19/2011
Yay! I was so excited to see you updated. I love these backstage looks into these moments. Nice how you explained that weird little smile he gets when Raven starts yelling at him again. XD
ntmnky chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Welcome back. Not that it'll help a lot, but I don't update nearly often enough (to my mind) either. The important part, is that this was as good as always. Looking forward to your next update.
The Cretin chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
I read chaps 1-2. Read em and loved em. You have captured their inner thoughts and their spirit spot on. I'm sorry this is my first review but this story came out before I started reviewing. I hope to catch up some more tomorrow if you'll allow me the honor. Keep rockin
FelynxTiger chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
After a couple of months of not reading FF, i came back and find THIS.

Oh i haven't read a good fanfiction like this in ages!.

3 years without an update wow, Well at least the story continues and you bring an other extraordinary yet incredible chapter!

The style and POV are utterly amazing ! i reaaaally enjoy reading this!

I can't wait to get to season 3, cuz we're still on season 1 episode 6 ._.

oh well i hope to see you soon in the next chapter! :D
titanfan45 chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Glad to see that you updated this. You did a great job on this one. I think it fit that partucular episode perfectly.
BG-13 chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Ahhhh! So sweet!
Butterfree chapter 4 . 12/2/2009
Remember girls, if a boy gives you a kiss, it means he likes you. If he gives you a giant chicken, it means he loves you.

Excellent take on that one small scene! Really, I'm impressed on how much developement you can squeeze out of these subtle scenes. The effect of doing the scenes in order of the show along with that makes this story seem like a whole story on its own. I love it and hope you'll continue one day!

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
Ah yes, this scene

You do well at making Beast explain his thoughts without making it seem like he's rambling on. Also, I've noticed how strict you are with keeping the story in present tense. That's definetly a hard thing to do.

I'm a bit shocked why you didn't include the scene right after where Starfire starts yelling at Raven and Beast Boy defends her though.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
I did think Raven was quite different in the 'Go!' flashback, but you explained why so well here. And of course, the most shocking action where she laughs at Beast Boy's joke was expressed well too. I can picture Raven being shy because of her isolation until then.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
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