Reviews for Restraints
Sara chapter 1 . 4/8
Love it!
LuckyTurtle chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Awwww...I love the ending! I could just imagine it PERFECTLY! Like one of those movies where it kind of starts back at the beginning again, and repeats something (bittersweet) from the first few moments of the movie. Obviously, yours didn't really repeat anything, but that's what I thought of. AMAZING job with this - it's brilliant and I love the idea. EXACTLY my kind of story! :)
WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
I loved this one so much!
StarsOfYaoi chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
i'll admit once again that this kind of plot is my secret guilty pleasure. i like how you worked it through, from naruto being older than he should, to his placement in itachi's team to all he's done for sasuke, team7, and then the chuunin exams and everything that changed so much.

there were small parts that would have been better made longer, but then this would have turned into more than a one-shot and although i would have liked it very much, this was perfect the way it was -as a long, great one-shot.

with such a different naruto striving to look forwards something that could help free his mind from the cage he's been put since he was little, it is not shocking that he's decided to leave the village in order to travel with itachi (and the ending was really touching *hearts*).

it was a great shot, really :D *loves more*

SOY
sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
So far i love your story(s). I've been going through them all and reading them just because you have the writing style i like. You're one of those authors i can just see as genuinely talented. :) xxx
AndHoursWillPassBy chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
It was the most wonderful thing that I have read for a long time. (*_*)

I can't wait that I get to read those long ones that you have wrote. All of the fics by you that I've seen before this were all awesome as well, so.. I'll be rewiewinf in the future as well. B]
animelvr chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
you know, i was just in the "mint" mood and stumbled upon this little gem. dang you are talented; i mean, why couldn't this have happened in the manga! this was a totally beautiful story ... thanks!
Konoko89 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
another good one!
Taira Yukiko chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
wow nice story real interesting!
Failing Mentality chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Beautiful.

Lol. I was always distracted by the characters, but whenever I glanced at them, I only saw the Chinese characters. And since I myself can read them, I was completely confused as to their meaning. Didn't realize it was Japanese...
A chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
You know, I realized that this is pretty much a reoccurring theme in most of your fics, if not all, but you really should start adding disclaimers. Being sued, as I would imagine, isn't fun.

As a general rule of thumb, I love just about all of your fanfictions, as I'm sure you've probably heard more than once. Nevertheless, it still holds true.

There were a couple errors in grammar and punctuation, but nothing that's too worrisome.

I really liked the way you presented the situation and the conflicting issues that resulted and changed the flow of the fic from the canon version of the manga (which I'm assuming you based it off of). I did think it was a little too rushed, though, especially in the beginning. I think a little more description would have benefited this greatly, but your work is your own, and as you said; it was a beastie.

Thanks for the read.

- A.
shadowninja-yuna chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
E, Naruto and Itachi are quickly becoming my favorite pair :D Love the story!
yaoihime22 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
i liked it , wished to have more of it , like what will happen to them and have them come back to visit the village something that i thought was not detailed enought was gaara i think it takes more to convince him to change but over all great work
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
cute

wonderful happy-ending!

Madame Minuit12
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
just...incredible ! really impressive.
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