Something similar to that happened to me while I was Playing pokemon Heartgold. I don't remember what Togepi was holding, but when it used fling and threw it, I was pissed off.

This was hilarious! Haha! Expect reviews for the rest of the chaps! ;D

I got up to this point in the story and stopped laughing at the games' stupidity to realize I too, never gave back his shuckle...Bwahahahaha!

The very same thing happened to my Togetic. It threw it's Silk Scarf. Funny chapter! Keep writing!

haha this story is awesome XD

it was only a matter of time before somebody noticed these flaws.

lol ur main character never eats, sleeps or goes to the toilet. thats something my sis and i noticed randomly one day

good job XD waiting for a new chapter

Ugh, I know just how you feel. I was training my Togepi and was trying to get it to evolve into Togetic. It was holding a Soothe Bell. The time before it had just used Blast Burn. An the came Fling. At that point I began to suspect that that evil little egg did it on purpose. But still, good chapter.

I was playing Fire Red reently. First metronome of the game:

Enemyt Clefairy used FRENZY PLANT.

And also, I got a warning about deletion on a fic of mine. It was a seventeen chapter story so disgusting even I think it's too bad.

It didn't get deleted.

~Stormy

I saw my pokemon doing that, I won't ever be able to look at them the same way again.

That's awesome. XD

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Pretty funny stories you got here.

I kinda wonder what would happen if a trainer tried to raise a Zangoose and a Seviper at the same time. They normally hate each other, so will it end in happiness or just a lot of scratching and what not?

Hilarious! Can you do one with team galatic?

Writer's block?

That sucks.

For you, I mean.

Good luck, and just try to plow through it.

-StarIlI

A.K.A. The guy with a lvl. 100 regegigas

Wow, that was really smart! I don't actually understand why it was something stupid in the game, like how a chatot can fly, but still...

-StarIlI

I always wondered why she kept saying that...

I didn't really get this chapter.

-StarIlI