Reviews for From PreEarth To Present Day
sisterawesomeness chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Sorry for reviewing your stuff all at once but once I started reading your stories I couldn't stop. This is pretty good so far. I wondered what would happen if some of them went back with her. Good cliff hanger with the whole shooting her thing. I really want to know what happens now! I know you're busy and I totally understand writer's block... But please update this or the other stories involving Yume soon! I can't wait for the Bodyguard sequel! Sorry, got excited 's late and my minds on a sugar high. I like how you made Maggie assertive, it compliments against the slow progression Yume took to gain her confidence. Man, this is really long. My bad. So, yeah please update Yume's stories or post the sequel. Keep on keepin on!

P.S. Somewhere in your comments you said no one reads your stories...Well I do and I love them! Sorry if I sound like a fan girl or worse... A strange Marysue!
Bumblebeecamaro38 chapter 5 . 8/1/2010
I like the story please update soon
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
NIce story UPDATE NOW

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Olreic chapter 5 . 1/9/2010
Finally a new chapter !

Uh oh, sure, Cheetor is in trouble... who's this Businessman again ?

Megatron actually killed a man ? You're not afraid of death...

Well... we cannot say Dinobot has affinities with human girls. Maggie obviously doesn't like him
Master Solo chapter 5 . 1/7/2010
police vs. Beast Warriors? awesomely hilarious! you kept me laughing with every chapter
Master Solo chapter 3 . 1/7/2010
disregard the last review. this story is hilarious

Your character's mom is very interesting. Gone for months and she's not suspicious? Mine tries to call and email all the tiime and gets angry if I don't answer, even tho I've already moved out for most of hte year.
Master Solo chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
just as hilarious s the last chapter. I might be a tad off right now, as I've yet to read hte rest of the story, but if they're in the 21st century, then wouldn't the humans be familiar with these robots, having witnessed the events of G1? Also, wouldn't the G1 transformers also be around?
Master Solo chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I'm usually not a huge fan of human OCs, but I read to the end of the first chapter and it's exciting. Nice work there!
Fawn O'Rion chapter 5 . 1/7/2010
this great if you need any help contact at deivantart.

-fawnstarscream1
GrimlockX4 chapter 5 . 1/7/2010
I liked Cheetor's idea for a distraction even though he didn't count on the police chasing him in their cruiser. lol
Fawn O'Rion chapter 4 . 1/6/2010
are you going to finish it?
Olreic chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Sorry for being late : I was a little busy with my test and other fics such as Aramanth...

As usual, I like this. Good to see Yume (and the Beast Wars characters) again. And I think you choose the right bot to come with Dinobot and Yume, since that's logical... However, I would have suggested you bring in the present another Predacon too. Like Waspinator (lol)...

Only one criticism : shouldn't Yume be burned by Megatron's shoot instead of just getting hurt to the chest ? (by the way, Megatron really is a coward! Attack in this way is really dishonorable...). Guess the shoot wasn't at full power, just to threaten the Maximals...
Xeno the Hedgehog chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
Is she going to live through that?
Lady-night-shade04 chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
W00T welcome back. Thanks for the update!
TehMarishal chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
Yay update! I've been looking forward to seeing an update for this story :D

It was really good. I'm glad they finally managed to find Megatron, hehe. Also YAY action and excitement!

I already know Yume will probably be fine, hehe. Although if I may make a request, I would like to maybe see a scene or something in the next chapter where they aren't sure if she'll be okay, and maybe Dinobot actually acts very concerned for once, hehe

It's up to you though, it's your story. Can't wait for more!
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