|Reviews for Unto Derision|
| madworld27 chapter 11 . 7/1/2014
Ryoma deserved better.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/28/2014
This story was...wow. It was so suspenseful and all those hints made me read it all in one sitting. I'm so glad this was completed when I found it otherwise I'd go insane waiting for the updates. The ending didn't seemed rushed at all. The chapters only felt short because I wanted more. This seems to be as happy of an ending as the circumstances would allow. My head canon for this fic is that Ryoma stays human. It would just seem hard spending the rest of eternity with your killers even if you did end up caring for them. If Ryoma stayed human, the way I see it, he gets to stay with the ones he love yet at the same time leave them pin from his mortality. It's not like they can forcibly change him. And I'm going to stop now before it gets too long but this fic was awesome
| ObscureLotus chapter 11 . 10/25/2012
This is one amazing story! The part about Kin'd past and betrayal is too heartbreaking, never saw it coming. T_T Ryoma being able to forgive them(mostly) is touching. :D
| ajwa chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
| wysei chapter 11 . 7/30/2012
LOL I vote snap one day and kill him- because I'm angsty like that. Great story!
| Shizaki Kuro chapter 11 . 7/30/2012
I loved the fic, and im just going to imagine that Ryoma was turned, i would be overly depressed for awhile if he killed anyone...
Thnx for writing
| Dimensional Roamer chapter 11 . 3/5/2012
This story is amazing. Fantastic job. The mood is just right at times, and there is also this hint of subtlety, and argh! Everything is just perfect, and even the ending is awesome, with Ryoma living amongst them yet still not fully forgiving them. I love this story. DR
| iyris chapter 11 . 2/18/2012
AWESOME! It's been awhile since I last read a vampire story because I got sick of the thought that most of the released book and stories nowadays are about them but I am glad I didn't ignore this one. I don't regret reading it, not when it got me so into it. The plot was great, it was unexpected for me. Especially Kin's death. I felt several emotions, trying to put myself into his feet. It kept me thinking at first what exactly happened then boom! I was like "Seriously? O_o T_T" And I was so excited at the last part. Btw, the way it was written was good too. I like your style. _
| alexroars chapter 11 . 4/1/2011
Oh my god, this is one of the BEST fanfics I have read so far! I love it! You are a very talented writer and have an amazing way of capturing a readers attention, keep writting and great job! :D
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 11 . 3/27/2011
It was just fit to end this way, somehow, I feel strangely content. I'd usually scream for a sequel or something, but now it's just this strange sense of...relief? still under a strong impression, as if I've just red a mysteriously beautiful novel. Sorry, I'm bad at words, but really, you should take on a new project if time and inspiration ever allows you, hopefully as long as this one. I know, i know, i'm imposing on you from the bottom of my black little heart, but, i can't help but harbor this strange preference, when it comes to carefully planned, complex stories (length is just something that comes along at times.) Oh well, yours was just fitting this description so well, it rarely gets to me really... I'm ranting about again, oh Kami-Sama! And my thoughts are drifting away and i suddenly start staring lazily at the sky in sheer azure contemplation, my eyes captured by...
Bystander: "Cut it woman, oh no, she's back, that crazy reviewer..." Fuji and Inui turned to look at me widening their deadly, ever so skimming smirks "Saa-" "-Ii Data!"
Me, suddenly shrinks to the tenipuri, cute, chibi version activating my super ultra golden remix deluxe improved version of a poppy dog eyes (with a practiced ease) while still backing away a step or two in the process. (my previous "I will survive" mantra song reviving in my mind)
They froze for less than 5 seconds, but just enough for me to escape grinning devilishly!
Fuji barely opens his eyes a little in surprise, Inui speaks everyone's thoughts "She's tricked us again, just how does she do that?" silence...the wind is blowing softly, the clouds keep drifting and..."There's a 99.9 per cent that we'll never figure this one out!" said the same scientific, yet slightly mythed voice. Silence again, soft green leaves rustled in glee jostled by the worm breeze and...
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
Damn, I totally saw that coming somehow, though I thought it was killing by mistake, or something around these lines, not murder and painfully burning betrayal. It was all so...so...breath-takingly sorrowful it will probably get stock into my mind for a while...though don't worry, i'm more your fun than ever. I guess drama is supposed to play its big part in everything, even reality... arigato!
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 9 . 3/27/2011
Well, considering I don't like Sakuno much, keen feels like more of a baby a seven year old kid or something, he's cute, somehow, but Ryoma is more the cunning, opposite pole, the attracting, intriguing one at that. Well, at least to me. Nice chapter-senpai, Until next time, ja...
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 8 . 3/27/2011
aaa, maybe we should worry a little on the account of our little sadistic sides, nee? though mine is a mild version of Fuji's so i don't really care, kekeke. Anyhow, the doom's day is coming, closing in, oh my! The sheer excitement of it all!
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
Yeah, I love Kaidoh two! I have a soft sopt for him and kin-chan. You know him, the red haired rookie who keeps calling Ryoma Koshimae...? Oh and I kinda like that Shiraishi weirdo two (and many others, Ryoma comes first on my list though), but enough with my sweethearts. I think you picture Kaidoh quite truthfully, good job. I enjoyed the chapter as always.
| Hikari-Pandora chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
beautiful as ever, especially the last part. If only everyone would have regards for their and other's life... theres no need for the supernatural for us to get reckless and wasteful in that matter. Our ordinary life does that to us sometimes, but the brave ones learn to take it all and try to do something with it or else we'd all turn suicidal. Enough with the deep stuff, I'm being cryptic, plus I'm blubbering around again, oh boy...! I beg for forgiveness - bow - maa, I'll calm down and just keep reading.