Reviews for A Death Note FanFic LxOC
white sparkey chapter 29 . 5/9/2014
This is probably one of my favorite Fanfictions, I wish you kept going with it, it is so good!
Moonlight Starlove chapter 29 . 3/27/2014
Hope that you'll continue updating this story again some day in the future :)
Guest chapter 25 . 8/1/2013
I legitly thought it was B.
Minao Tskino chapter 21 . 7/11/2013
I cried...That's all I can say...I cried...
Minao Tskino chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
So, for the first time, L is wrong.
Tbird2290 chapter 7 . 6/7/2013
When she was like "who do you think you are? L? The famous detective?" I died. Then my mom gave my dad the 'I-think-she-needs-medical-attention' look.
L chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I think you did really well loved it
Chibi Kiren chapter 10 . 1/22/2013
I found it cute when L even considered going down to help her personally, something he never even thought of in the anime, though I have not read the manga it would have been awesome is Adelynne was an actual character in the anime. Nice job!
Izzy chapter 18 . 10/11/2012
Sappho chapter 7 . 10/8/2012
L just fucked her shit...
shushu422 chapter 29 . 8/1/2012
I really really like this story! I hope everything in your life is okay now...
I hope you update again. I would LOVE to read more of it :)
Gaara Sempai chapter 1 . 11/12/2011

How... how did I miss the lemon?

Anyway, I love this story. I love it this much!

*holds hands like, 3 miles apart*

I hope it's not finished! PLEASE TELL ME IT ISN'T!
Gaara Sempai chapter 27 . 11/12/2011
I know it's kind of late, but I send my condolences regarding the passing of Meeko.

My cat of 14 years, whom I had know and loved my entire life passed away from cancer this past January, the 13th. A Thursday.

She wouldn't eat, and much the same as you, when the cat didn't eat, I didn't eat.

R.I.P. Ethel Mertz, 6/13/1996-1/13/2011, and R.I.P. Meeko


Just this side of heaven is a place called Rainbow Bridge.

When an animal dies that has been especially close to someone here, that pet goes to Rainbow Bridge. There are meadows and hills for all of our special friends so they can run and play together. There is plenty of food, water and sunshine, and our friends are warm and comfortable.

All the animals who had been ill and old are restored to health and vigor. Those who were hurt or maimed are made whole and strong again, just as we remember them in our dreams of days and times gone by. The animals are happy and content, except for one small thing; they each miss someone very special to them, who had to be left behind.

They all run and play together, but the day comes when one suddenly stops and looks into the distance. His bright eyes are intent. His eager body quivers. Suddenly he begins to run from the group, flying over the green grass, his legs carrying him faster and faster.

You have been spotted, and when you and your special friend finally meet, you cling together in joyous reunion, never to be parted again. The happy kisses rain upon your face; your hands again caress the beloved head, and you look once more into the trusting eyes of your pet, so long gone from your life but never absent from your heart.

Then you cross Rainbow Bridge together...

Author unknown...
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 8 . 11/8/2011
~ your mother and grandmother were shot and fatally wounded

numb shock

~ He wasn't going to get away with this.

Why did he do this? Stealing money, I understand, when you are in need and somebody else has spare, but killing? Killing people whom you haven't even known? Killing people who haven't harmed you? Killing is only acceptable in self-defence, and even then it shouldn't be first choice.

~ 'Kira,' I thought, 'I owe you one...'

Will L suspect she is Kira?

~ I had never been a supporter of Kira's motives,


~ I had recited this mini-speech to several other people; but now, saying it to Hideki, for some reason seemed wrong.

Analyse this...

How can L suspect her of being Kira?

I wish you luck... But it can help only those still breathing. It cannot return dead to the land of living.
Kiko Mizuhara chapter 29 . 9/24/2011
Hey, I hope you haven't given up on this story and you'll one day update and I hope you are feeling better.
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