Reviews for My Name is Naruto
dfaf chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
you should read I am David. Its a literature book about a boy in a concentration camp who dont even know his name and later escape it. He scoured the wilderness of europe and escape all soldiers and learn more about himself as a human beeing, the morality of stealing/killing to survive, you know, that sort of thing.

If you read that, you can rewrite this story better. They say a good writer is a good reader to. Book critics dont usually read the book and give extremely general reviews. They are not good readers. You have to be open minded.
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I think this was great. Morbid, but great.