Reviews for Wonderful Pumpkin Pie
Sapphire Rose E chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
it was good but you never put the part where kanata eats dinner and if he sees the pie or not.
misstruthfully chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Kanata is a pervert.. hahaha...

I feel sorry for Miyu...

Actually if she did not dozed off maybe the pie will be tasty..

(just my opinion..maybe for others it will taste bad)

hope you update soon..

I want to find out what Miyu wants to wish for...

and why is she blushing when Kanata puts his hand in Miyu's shoulder?

ja-ne
ahvs chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Thats what I expect...Miyu's pie will get burn hhahaha! Nice chappie! Update soon! go SIS!
I.idora chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
hey :) it looks promising. it is something i would watch out for i hope you post the recipe as well because i bake. :) although, i'd suggest that you have it proofread before you post it. i can proofread the first chapter for you if you like. it's not very long anyway and there are only a little corrections. pm me so i can work on it.

happy writing :) update soon :)
misstruthfully chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
update soon..

can't wait.. this is interesting..

wonder what will happen next... :)

hope Miyu will not burn down the house.. haha.. just joking..

hope she'll do fine...

by the way in this story.. is ruu and wanya here?

sorry i'm just my curious..
insanely lucid chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
it's cute _

update so0n

haha bow down kanata bow!
Sapphire Rose E chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
i cant wait! i wonder how it'll turn out. lol i was just about to eat some pumpkin pie for dessert. haha i was writing about it too.
missymace chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
since you asked for it, here's a review. :) lol

i like your idea. keep it coming okay? :)

let's see how miyu will do..

xoxo
ahvs chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
hehe... nice start! Really if iam Miyu i'm going to knock-off Kanata! Even I like him much! hahaha!

Im looking 4ward 4 ur nxt fic!
daddynaz chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
“Damn Kanata! We’ll see about that. I absolutely will make him bow to me with my pie.”

if you are an adult like me, that line was hella funny if you understood the perversity behind it. hehehe.
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