|Reviews for Kingdom Hearts: One More Adventure|
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/9/2014
The fanfiction thing hilarious
| Pewventurian chapter 31 . 10/18/2013
Taran an eliownys good bye is acually how I imagined sora and Kiari to get together
Except instead of an oak tree it would be the papupo tree they used to watch the sunset on.
And taran promising to come back to her?
Hmm... Where have I heard that before? *coughcough-kingdomheartsoneending-coughcough*
And this looks very promising for third season of this epic story.
This is even better than 'Kingdom hearts-a new adventure' and maybe even better than kingdom hearts3 (I wouldn't know because I'm not itirely
| Unknown chapter 22 . 10/14/2013
You know something?
After I read this I couldn't get the headless horseman out of my head. And guess what? We sang a song about him in school once!
It went a little like this (I tweaked it a little)
I saw a horseman
Ride over the hill
The moon shown bright
The night was still
The faint clop of hoves awoke me
I thought it was a deer but then
I saw him atop his ghostly steed
The horses fur was black as night
Its eyes glowed red
And then I realized
The ridder had no head.
He turned to me
So I pulled out my blade
He laughed evilly
Then turned and rode away.
Then I noticed a red haired girl tied up ridding on his mount.
I was about to follow
Until he rode into
I've been on many dangerous rides
But not even I can pass through there and hope to survive.
Every word of this story is true
So you should keep an eye out
Or He Might Get You Too.
(in truth only the first part was from the original)
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/13/2013
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! STICHS IN HERE
I now officially declare this fanfic, AWESOME!
(it was already 60% awesome now it a definet 90)
| Skylord Tyler chapter 17 . 10/13/2013
I like the idea of (I forget his name) being a keyblade weilder. Honestly I haven't watched 'the black caldron' for, let me think...
5 years? I don't remember the plot or the names of the carecters, but I remember (I think it starts with an L), the princess and a little creature that looks like pooka from Anastasia. you know that Disney movie about 'the Romenof curse' if that rings any bells
| Ryxtel chapter 17 . 10/13/2013
This has to be the best fanfic I've every read!
| Akila E. Ferrari chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Oh, oh! I like this story. I've read the volume I, and I LOVE volume I.
But, I don't understand about Star Wars..so..hehe sorry.
Give me permission for Favorite this okay? Thank you!
Michan: He didn't answer yet!
Haru: Eh? Did you say something?
Michan: Forget it...
| SoraLego278 chapter 29 . 10/7/2012
WOW! I wonder how this battle will end?! I'll be reading the next chapter just after I submit this Review.
Also, when the invasion started, I began listening a song from KH BBS, which is fan-named "A Battle of Great Valor". That entire sequence fits into the invasion exactly!
| Zorua chapter 11 . 10/22/2011
i now know how the jungle book ends thank you lord moldybutt
| Zorua chapter 7 . 10/22/2011
this wrold will be tough for me to read through for one very good reason i have never been able to see the jungle book all the way through without falling asleep. infact it's that way with my whole family. *yawn* it's not because of your writing style just something about the movie is a sleep aid to me. great choice on vullans though and you're right the horned king is the ultimate disney villan way creepier then millafacint; don't even think i spelled that correctly
| Q-A the Authoress chapter 7 . 7/8/2011
It's okay I think the Horned King deserves more credit along with The Black Cauldron movie. I like all things Disney so I'm a fan :)
Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
| The king riku chapter 31 . 6/2/2010
DUDE THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER I LOVED IT! but you should really finish your shadow of an empire story too I really want to know how it ends
| Kingdom Hearts 1 fan chapter 31 . 2/21/2010
Man! How did Maleficent come back AGAIN!
| Kingdom Hearts 1 fan chapter 28 . 2/21/2010
Oh no! I can't believe that The Princesses Of Heart have to take that blood on them like that.I feel really bad for Kairi girl can't even stand up!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING THESE STORIES!
| Kingdom Hearts 1 fan chapter 26 . 2/20/2010
I think that is kind of cool that Riku likes Kairi.I mean,you could definitely tell from the made it so obvious.I also feel so bad for ,as long as he has Eilonwy by his side,then he will always believe-in himself,and never,ever give up hope.