Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
mabidiso chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Very disturbing and fascinating.
CreativeChilde chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
i am ridiculously confused on what just happened.

but it was still pretty good.

i rather liked the way it was written. :3
anon chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
first fic? not at all bad! :) thrilling, thanks for writing.
Seto's Darkness chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I love how confused Itachi is - and even his confusion feels IC ;; It was a bit disturbing, but hey, I like disturbing especially when it's for this pairing 8D

I hope you do write more fics (especially for ItaSasu)!
xXxUchiha DaisyxXx chapter 1 . 10/17/2009

That's the only thing I'm capable of saying xDD
Musu chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
very good...

touching (but not like cry touching) in some wierd way...

made me a bit breathless... nice! :3
The True Grammar Nazi chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
o.o That's vaguely disturbing. Very cute, but disturbing. - That's probably why I like it!
Veja24 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
That was very strange fic... Itachi didn't felt attracted to Sasuke, yet he f*cked him? And he didn't peak 'cause he didn't know why was he abusing his brother? Wtf? That doesn't sound like Itachi one bit, but some brainless idiot instead.
Kevin Edwards chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Thom chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
That was really deep for porn. Good writing skills as well.
apocatlypse chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Wow...that was amazing! I can't believe this is your first fic! I really like your style and the way that you wrote it xD I like the whole Itachi in denial thing xD Also, the way you used contradiction to tell the story was really unique. Wonderful job! The concept was great! *Favs*
emma'xo chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
One word, amazing. No, two, impressive; there was a little bit of inexperienced thoughts on the fic but that's because this is your first story on here. Otherwise, this is very, very good. Angsty but lovely. Much different than the many identical fics that are posted on here.

I also agree with SakuraKiss13.

"Okay, first of all, I like your style of writing but its a little contradictory and doesn't make sense in some parts."
sharingan-assassin chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
This was so sad but really great written. They way you described it and the ending was so mysterious. I really like your style
Missy chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I loved this fic so much!well written and long enough!Yay you!
UchihaJIS chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Its like a mystery.

Why didn't Sasuke say a word or make a sound?

How did he really feel?
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