Reviews for Swim
patiicm chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Sweet! You should make a sequel or something..

Keep it up!
InTheLovelyDarkness chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Hahaaha!

Lol at Edward's reaction when Bella said "Edward, I'm all wet!"

Edward has a dirty mind. : )

-Anna
bananasrgood chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
mmmm well...sorry but i cant say i like it too much. i dont hate it. cuz it really wasnt all that bad.

but there is one line that i actually DO hate. its where emmett says this:

"Ewww! As exciting as this is for you grandpa, can you save it for when we're not around. It's sickening enough for me, so I can't imagine how unbearable it is for Jasper to have to feel the luh-uhveee coming off of you two."

of ALL people, dont you think EMMETT should understand what edward was feeeling? i dont know i guess i just hated that line because it would have been tooo immature for emmet to say that. this story also should have been rated T.

just my oppinion...

-bananassss :))
8KateTheGreat8 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Haha, this made me laugh
4kitty101 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
very nice :)
lips-like-morphinee chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
update soon
mariskafan2012 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
LMAOO! hahaha the ending was hilarious! great job lol
sailor alpha tomboy chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
keep going
a-098jhkjh chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
LOL "im all wet"
Oh.Its.Her chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I just have one thing to say- LOL.
LadyTrish chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
hahahahahhahahahah!that was awesome...poor Edward...but that was great :))thank you for sharing :))
SignedAnon chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
lol
BellaLover101 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
make more! chap 2 would be nice :)
DCCDchick chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
phahhaahah loved it!

also, a good start if you were inclined to continue.
fleckpuppy chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
hahahaha...wow.
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