|Reviews for Changing the future|
| ano chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Nice! This was a good start to what could be a very interesting story. I see alot of potential for this fic. Keep on going!
P.S. Couple of spelling mistakes though... No matter, easily corrected!
| rournix chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
nice idea. interested to see where it goes.
| nightwing27 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
nice start it look it's going to be a good one
| kidcrud chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
This was a pretty good start update soon
| Nysk chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Good story other than spelling, but you explained that in the beginning so it is definitely forgivable.
I look forward to more of this tale.
| Sentiment Remains chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
First off I would like to say that was freaking...awesome!
The pairing is great I love a good ol Kei/Motoko pairing.
Though yes a few mistakes here and there the stories premise looks solid can't wait to see where you go with it.
GREAT JOB LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE!
| HarimaHige chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Juhu im the first one. Best part of it is the paring. I always liked this paring. Great choice. For the first chapter it was ok but you have a lot of grammar mistakes. Well english isnt my mother language as well so it isnt that bad. But there are others who cares. You made the right choice to write this fic. I also thought about writing an LH Mot/Kei fic but my language problems prevent me from it. I respect you for your courage. thanks