|Reviews for A Language Not Yet Known|
| CodeLyoko chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Oh you have NO idea how much I squealed during this fic D I loved how oblivious Demyx was that Zexion knew It was beautiful! I wish there was more 3
| A-diction chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Gaiman: Neil Gaiman, writer of the Sandman comics. Zimmerman: Bob Dylan, thoroughly awesome man. D
I really liked this, it was ridiculously cute.
| doomshuriken chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Oh, wow this was absolutely ADORABLE! 3
THe ending was a little awkward, but hey, I can't do any better, soo... yeah. lolz to Axel. Props to you.
Nurr, oh, and becoafamu says "UPDATE ALREADY!"
| Kabbage Kat chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
So I've just been going through some of my faves and deleting the not-so-good ones and this is /totally/ staying.
Oh my gosh I love Zexion's last name (the only refence I was concious enough to catch)! Neil Gaiman's one of my favorite authors of all time. Kudos to you for being so cool to know about him (I find that many people don't, which is just a shame).
Anyway, this is just as positively adorable as it was the first time I read it. Seriously cute.
| Kiki Lelsissia chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Aren't mutual friends the greatest? Man, I wish one of my friends would do something like this for me. First I'd have to have my own Zexion though, ha.
Well, the only name reference I caught in here was one of the classmates, Lana, is my cousin's nickname. I doubt that's the kind of reference you meant.
Awesome little story! Quite sweet.
| Hysteri chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Aww! So cute. Fluff is godly :3
I loved every last bit of it. haha Demmy, stalking, haha.
| singingstars chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Oh gawd, I love it!
And how Dem-Dem is running just so meet him. Cute!
Btw, I Loved the last line of what Zexion said ;D
| Mello7 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
So, much of this lovely oneshot was spent giggling and squueing in delight and nervous anticipation. Until Zexion's inner musings: "C'mon little fishy, take the nice bait." That's when I disintegrated and the bits and pieces ran off in different directions, it was just that wonderful, funny and mischievous.
I love your Zexion, he's confident and not all that anti-social. And he's smart. M, smart guys with great hair.
Plus the pairing is one of the most optimistic ones KH has to offer. I'm sure that someone noticed their little kissing session in the coffee shop and went to the restroom to deal with whatever problem occurred.
The text flows very nicely, and I especially liked Zexion's last name. That's a ref to Neil Gaiman, right? And Demyx's last name. That's Bob Dylan's real last name. David Browning only reminds me of Dan Brown so I think I'm off track on that one. Dan Brown just came to mind although I don't find his books very good. A good imagination but a little ridiculous and shallow.
Oh, and a very extra special thanks for adding a little bit of AkuRoku. It's my dearly beloved OTP.
| NormalAddict chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Absolutely adorable and very well written from the beginning off, I could practically see the smug grin apparant on Zexion's face. Great job, I loved reading it.
| Jessy-Fran chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Very nice. I loved the way that Zexion was written in this, totally manipulative and sneaky. Very different (and better!) to the usual quiet emo that people make him out to be! A Demyx was great too. I love that boy's quirkiness!
I would have loved to have seen more on the bet between Axel and Demyx (Maybe it being null and void because it was Zexion who asked Demyx out?) That may have been interesting to read.
Zimmerman and Gaiman? Bob Dylans real name and the genius that is Neil Gaiman...? Or am I looking to hard into this? Haha
Nice piece that didn't drag on, good stuff!
| Kishiro Kitsune chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This was an amazing story. I've tried my hand at writing Zemyx one-shots before, but none of them come close to this.
I adore Demyx's internal monologue and adding in Zexion's own thoughts towards the end was the icing on the cake. I think I actually started holding my breath at the end (right about the time Zexion asked him if Demyx wanted to know what he really liked.)
This is definitely going onto my list of favorites. I'm also going to try and get a friend to read it. I think she'd enjoy it too.
| foreverxXxsamexXx chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
ZEMYX! Aw, so adorable. This totally deserves moar than 9 reviews. Om nom nom cookie :3 Zemyx ftw!
| Dystopian Hope chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Adorable story. I especially like the bit of scheming Zexion did (so to speak...). I definitely see him as an English major.
Your writing is excellent. Well-composed and flows nicely. I shall have to read more when I get the chance!
| Forced Smile chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
This was completely adorable! I really, really enjoyed reading it, and the whole following thing with Demyx was too cute. Zexion with his little thoughts like "C'mon little fishy, take the bait." had me in stitches. Keep writing! Insta fave!
| Sky Blue Baby chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
LunaTea reminded me of "When the Day Met the Night" by P!ATD. I loved the story.