Reviews for Long Past Time
Hunnique chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Excellent voyage inside Dean and Sam's thoughts. You have a way with them!
Merisha chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Great story! I love the way you describe Dean and Sammy, both stubborn LOL ;) - brilliant insights and lovely imagery. Can't wait for an update. This is going straight to fav's, I love your writing style!

Kind regards

Merisha ;0)
amyblair chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Nonverbal, eh?

You worked it well.

Liked your description "ugly and raw"

Really liked "knew how to push his buttons... hell, he'd installed a lot of them himself."

I always say we teach the ones closes to us how to treat and talk to us. We're all very powerful that way.

Enjoyed the line "he'd look like a box of crayons in a couple of days"

This is quiet and gentle and miserable all meshed together.

Nice job.
Twinchy chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Very good story, moving and tenderly told with interesting insights into the two brothers' (different) character.

It breaks my heart to know that the following phone call from their dad's right that night would drive them even further apart, despite their guilt. At least Sam and Dean managed to get over their problems for the time being at the end of the "Scarecrow" adventure.
samanthasgirl chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
I liked this but your description is misleading. I was expecting them to talk but there was no conversation. So you should change that to Sam's "thoughts".