Reviews for Unjust Fear
Ronin101 chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
oh my goodness, what a cliff hanger, and then you compound the foreshadowing and anticipation with teasers for the next chapter. Eep! Oh, the angst! :-D Can't wait!
wandamarie chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
wow it was a good chapter and oit is getting good pleas up date when you can thanks
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
We can properly address your injuries and ailments and threat them." - should be treat them. Treat an injury or give someone a treat (candy) is not spelled with an h. You need to proofread your stories and possibly get a beta.
witchsbroom chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
OMG what a chapter. Looks like poor Lucius is going to have to get used to having all those Gryffindor's around , but I'm sure some of those Slytherin traits that Harry also has wlll be coming out more. Oh yeah I'm sure Hermione is in seventh heaven being in that library. Oh oh who else would put in for Harry's guardianship since Sirius is still on trial. Hoping the do find him innocent (since he is) Can't wait to read the next chapter to find out who else to going for Harry, and what the plan on doing with Quierrelmort.
Estel Ashlee Snape chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Good chapter. Keep up the good work!
Estel
WolfKeeper989 chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Nice job!
Phoenix1592 chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Minerva has come seeking Severus' expertise dealing with the Quirrellmort

Harry minds Severus very well, and knows enough not to test him

lol, Hermione being in the Malfoy Library is like heaven to her

Sirius' trial will be continuing soon

Lucius is a smart man, he recognizes quickly the positives of Draco's new friends, though they are Gryffindors

the contest of Severus' guardianship is not good news at all,
but Lucius should be able to find out who has contested

Severus should not keep the contest of his guardianship from Harry,
Harry does have a right to know, and telling him would avoid alot of unpleasant events should he not be told, and finds out otherwise
DarkRavie chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Great chapter! I really like this story and look forward to reading what happens next.
ElegantButler chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
"The male Dursley". Sounds like a zookeeper describing one of the orang-u-tans. Absolutely brilliant. Lol!
ElegantButler chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Great job on this chapter. Snape is wonderfully in character during the time when he does not yet know about Harry's time with the Dursleys and his change of heart when he learns the truth is wonderfully believable.
repeatedmadness chapter 19 . 6/5/2013
Next chapter NOW
darthcat chapter 19 . 5/29/2013
THIS IS TOTALLY AMAZING! PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU:-):-):-):-)
alys09 chapter 19 . 5/15/2013
Enjoying your story very much like your spin on things... Harry befriending slythrkns early and getting away from the dursleys. Particularly like the malfoy relationships
jeanette9a chapter 19 . 5/4/2013
see you next time ;3
jeanette9a chapter 18 . 5/4/2013
Quirrellmort sounds like some kind donky musical, do you have any idea how mutch hilariousness those mental images are? XD
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