|Reviews for What Were You Dreaming About?|
| purple1girl chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
i liked it
| Suicide Emo chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That was hot.
| lola chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
that was absolutely amazing!
| Twilightfan108 chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Very sexy and rather romantic
| shadowgrave22 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Thanks for reminding me to breath. Whoo!
Sorry to damper the mood I just set but here is where my beta nature sets in. You didn't have the best grammar, you used double meaning words (Ex. horse but you meant hoarse) and the ending was a bit rushed. I suggest you get a beta.
-POINTS TO SELF-
Otherwise, very good, very good.
| Suzy Q Something chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
| kneon chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Short but great lead up.
| intensewhatever chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Breathe. Breathe. In. Out. In. Out.
well, if i'm focusing on my breathing i think your can guess what i thought of it. wow! that's all i can say. wow!
| roxane beanre chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
nice... i loved that story! keep writing!
| pupp63 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
that was such a good story... :D
| fleckpuppy chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
| LaxTuaxCantantexx chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Edward REALLY brings sexy back! lolz
This was really cute and it pinpointed what most stories doesnt
| harleyquinn2112 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Thanks for telling me to breathe.
| heartsewnsleeve chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
this exactly why i hate bella ;]