|Reviews for Naruto, Son of Naraku|
| A W chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
If there is one thing I don't like (and it really is just one thing), it's that he kept his canon "I have Down Syndrome" looks with only a few changes, not exactly doing homage to his much more attractive parents there.
| David Archangel chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
| Beserkians fury chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Hm. A visible improvement to the first chapter. There was just something... missing in the first chapter that feels present here. Also, you didn't break the fourth wall several times. This chapter is well done. Continue.
| Vermiculus-umbra-chorus chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
I can't wait to read more.
| StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
Cool 2 chapters continue please.
| fairy tail dragon slayer chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
You have listed Naruto as the main character, but you have changed his parents and name so this is not Naruto.
Think before you write.
This is not a flame
| Reishin Amara chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
...seriously?So'unga?love the overkill...
| Jose19 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I am very interested but why would Naraku be interested in a Human's life because he doesn't care for anything but his own life, and he was evil personified, and is Naraku Minato or someone else.
| Jose19 chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
I have a question because I like the story but doesn't being a son of Naraku make him evil because he was a bastard in Inuyasha, and deserved to die because anyone that has read Inuyasha knows how evil he was in that story but doesn't this apply to him as well.
| Darkth Shadow chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This is a very good story, I hope to read more soon
| the kishins darkness chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
naraku is a mary sue and ofc with giving them lots of info of his ablities and if he had a million demons in his army then the shinobi world apart from the leaf is fucked
go back rewrites this untill this is more belivble
P.S i am not insulting you this idea is a good one you just need to redo it until its belivble
| daniel 29 chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Chapter 2 word for word is the same as chapter 1
| skeith89 chapter 2 . 1/16/2013
Chapter 2 is just half of chapter 1
| Zak saturday 1 chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
Update soon please and have Naruto have A Pelt like his dad along with those hives carry's
| Animefangirl95 chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
Oh dear someone has a hurt pride lol