Reviews for A Single Breath
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Tragic but amazing story. Thanks for posting!
ICanSeeFineInAnyColor chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Casamora chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
This has been posted for a while, so this might not mean anything anymore, but for what it's worth, this is not a cliche idea. Cliche is anything involving truth or dare or kareoke.

This is a rare thing, because most Twilight people usually don't include the dark side of things... that I have seen so far, anyway.
Lucy Marie Swan chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
aw.. edward killed bella? UGH! its really good... but edward killed her! AWGUH!
TurningANewPage chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Wow. That was so good. I loved it! Thanks for writing!

Brynn
1LovesLatin3 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
interesting... depressing but interesting
orangemice311 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
This was fun to read too...
Pruhana chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
wow...very nice...awesome actually...only you should do a sequel
Tennisgirl101 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
AMAZING! Well written! Very descriptive! Fabulous!
Khlarka2 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
excellent writing :D i loved it!
karina5185 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
That was beautifully written, and I love how you ended it.

Of course I woudn't want that to happen for real.

:P
bubbles272 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
oh my god that was amazing! thats like one of the best stories i evr read! just wow!
Frawny chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
oh my gosh, that was soo intense. are you going to write more of it?
kellicolleen chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
aww that was so sad! it was a realy interesting plot though, I've never read anything like it! is this just a one shot, or are you posting more chapters?
Daniela April Cullen chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
That. Was. Awesome.

So tragic

-tear-
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