Reviews for Ambients Flame
enchantedwriter72 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Hey Jon. This is good. It's a little hard to read so you might want to do some editing but it IS good. Obviously I don't know anything about zoids, but that's ok. See ya soon.

Seize the Day,

randomcat23 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Interesting. You don't see much about Ambient and Hiltz and you did a good job of writing their evil personalities. I could see Hiltz saying and doing everything you described.

I have a few suggestions for you though. The whole fic shouldn't be written in bold. I find that distracting. And if the large paragraph near the end was broken up into maybe three it would be a lot easier to read.
ShadowRebirth37 chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Very, very cool Wolf! I liked this, even though I'm not a huge fan of Ambient. I loved it, I think you captured Ambient's love of killing and destruction perfectly! Well done!

Well, now you have a fic for every Organoid! Now what are you going to do, some about the Organoids' partners? XD lol.

Anyway, this was very good! I really liked it! I can't wait for the next one! ;D