|Reviews for Sins of the Father|
| TheExplodingPriest chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
O.O MELLO GOT RAPED BY A PRIEST. A CREEPY PEDO PRIEST. O.O XD I feel awful for laughing at that thought.
I'm not offended~ -is a coop Catholic who can read this shit all day long- XD There are priests like that...
I'm scared to go to church now. XDDDD
| Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I'm Catholic, and, since you asked, I didn't find myself going "what was she talking about." :) I'm sorry about the reputation our priests have. It's not normally like that, you know? I'm not offended because I know that did happen, but... please understand, it's not the norm.
And, no worries, you got the prayers right. _
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Yay story! Poor Mel... and crepy priest! REALLY creepy priest! The change in attitude thing scared me! And this story is left at such a cliffhanger moment! You never get to see Matt's reaction! Jeez... :[ *pouts* '
| youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
great last, bitter, line from mello. really, that was a very good line. the poor thing... he's just too tempting. ack. (and even poor matt, to a lesser degree.)
i'm not really ofended, but then again, i'm not catholic, so there you go.
| IMMAFIRINMAHLAZER chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
| Nickolasius-the-Conquerer chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
You got it right! Also there really are prest who do that kindda crap so no not to offensive!
| OvenBased chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Hmm...A bit simple at points. Throw in some more detail, extent it a tad (Maybe another 500 words or so) I would probably up to an M, and throw in a few swears for good measure xD
Hell, I have read much more innocent stories with M ratings. I have never read this theme before, really. I have read alot with Catholic undertones but none of what your story covered.
Decently written :)
| Alchemic-Soi chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
That was a very good, very well written oneshot. I'm Episcopalian, not Catholic, so I'm not sure of all their views on religion etc. I didn't find it offensive, though some people may. It was just such a strong, emotionally strong story.
Keep up the great writting ]
| phollie chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Wow...a very dark yet very powerful fic. One of the most effective that I've read so far...
This was a brilliant piece of work. Not only are you writing skills very impressive, but the way that you included a real life problem in your story was inspiring. The last line gave me chills!
| The Munch chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
You got the prayers spot-on, and I would hope I'd know them... Yeah, I'm Catholic, my dad's actually a permanent deacon (first level of ordination in our church, before priest). Yeah.. so I'd hope I know them . Anywho... some people might be offended by the whole priest thing, but the sad thing is it happens and it happens often. We've had a whole mess of it in our diocese...
Very good story! It was very sad and touching but it was very good and very well written.
| draco-is-the-punk chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Don't worry, you got it right. The Hail Mary was how I say it anyway. (I'm not a Catholic, I just own a rosary. I have a Buddhist and Muslim one as well.)
| merichuel chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
I'm catholic, although spanish, but my holy mary (in spanish) fits yours (in english) so i think it's correct...? xD
good chapter, don't think it was offensive, so mello was raped? poor child...
please uodate soon
| flamablechoklit chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
I loved that. You got the prayers right. You have no idea how sad this made me, but it was very good. I knew the preist would be trouble. -sigh- I want to give Mello a hug now. Or Matt could give him a hug. I AM SO SAD! Dx But I love you for writing this! And as much as he doesnt deserve it, Mello just seems like he's been raped, ya know? Maybe its just me... Anyway, awesome job.
| AlmightySponge chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
lol, naw, you got the prayers right.
And what a nice fic... very sad...