Reviews for La La Lie
Ravengal101 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Beautiful.
shourin chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
it was beautiful. really, breathtakingly beautiful.
Akizakura202 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Brava! Well-written :) An interesting, and so true, take on Ino; although in reality you could totally tell she bought it when Sai called her beautiful in the original writing. Knowing this did not diminish the awesomeness of this one-shot, however. Good work.

Valedictions,

Aki
ultimatebishoujo21 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
aw how cute
Miss Hydrangea chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This was so sweet... They both had their own voices (free-indirect style is something that wins me over, time after time after time xD), which was nice, and I really liked how you actually continued the story from Ino's POV instead of just showing the opposite side of the same events.
abstract.serenity chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
I loved this. I really liked how you gave some depth to Ino; it was very well executed and I commend you on being able to do so. I really like the explanation you gave from Sai calling Ino "beautiful".

The flow of this fic. There wasn't a single awkward sentence, which pulled me into the story. Spelling, punctuation, grammar all seem to be in very good. I didn't spot one typo or mistake. :)

You an excellent job. This is definitely going onto my favourites list.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Painful...
SmexyNerdOfSmexville chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Wow; this is absolutely amazing. Well done. :D
fang shinobi chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
o.0 One word. Awesome.

Best inosai I've read so far, if I may say so myself.

Anyway, great job and keep up the good work.
jc-1225 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Sai is still Sasuke, ne? OI stopped watching Naruto a while ago, but I had to read this story. So forgive me if I seem to you stupid. I really enjoyed reading this. I almost cried reading it too. Well done. I love the detail and the understanding that I felt when reading Ino's thoughts.

-Liz
kiwi4me chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
wow... this is good and sad..

but sickening good! lol

great work
Shadow Owner chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Yugao,

This was interesting; I liked the way you let Sai perceive Ino, and the references to events that occured, and from there show the progression of their relationship as friends.

I found it sad when Ino used Sai to attempt to fantasise over Sasuke, because I wouldn't expect that from her, and because Sai doesn't deserve that. Still, doing so made the story more beautiful (especially because despite his suspicions he still let her, even if only as a friend), in the sense that one of them always seems to be lying to the other at each point.

Someday, hopefully, they'll both see each other for who they really are, and accept them for it. I'd love to read that in a sequel, if you'd write it!
Super-Sweet chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Sad ending.
TheUntameableShrew chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Aw...

SaixIno is a very cute couple actually...atleast with the non-perverted Sai...in this fic anyway...

XP

But Ino was being... sort of... unintentionally bitchy one would call it...

P

Love it!

Put more SaixIno in...

Ps- i know this's supposes to be SasuxIno but it just doesnt seem that way...
CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Very nice, I like it.
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