! i cant even think of something to write excep genuis and i love ur writing and hope to see it updated soon,plz

DAMN PHANTOM FREAK! NO MORE ** NOTES! WHAT THE HELL? JUST FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

O MY GOSH!

that is so cool i want this book i cant wait to find out what happens OMG!

Okay, I know I've reviewed before.

Just... some critique? i love giving out critiques.

your plot is good. it has some meaning, but I'm kind of confused. they were friends and screwed around... yeah, i get that, kind of like Juno. but Sam claims towards the beginning she doesn't rememebr that night, yet at the end she's the one who clarifies it? huh?

i already commented on the paternity test, no no further word on that.

your grammar is also a bit rocky. it's good in some places yet is kind of falling apart in others. please don't take offense in this- no story is perfect. mine are not. just... well, the offer to beta read is still up.

RenesmeeScarlet

well, good, but a bit rushed. there were some grammar issues, but nothing absolutely awful. if you need a beta reader, i would be glad.

anyway, for paternity tests, they take blood.

please continue.

That was beyond awesome... be-awesome! WOO! I'm so glad you posted the chapter... many people say that but they never post in like a year or two... YOU ROCK! And so does your story! Fan loves you too!

Interesting, the grammer is a little off, and I think it should be rated T for teens... but I'm not sure. Maybe not. Anyways, not bad.

Signed, AvatarAddict

Well can't say I didn't see this coming but I would really love to see more of this story.

hey when are you going to write the next chapter? e-mail me when you posted the next chapter here: okay? I need to know the rest!

I honestly expected that...

But they weren't a couple! OMG!

Update!

Peace,

RenesmeeScarlet

Uh oh, Sam.

Good story. You can do a lot with it, but you do need to fix your grammar. It isn't as bad as some of the stories on here, but I am a grammar Nazi. And you spelled 'board' wrong. It's bored.

Please update. Who is the father? was she raped?