|Reviews for The Alone and the Lonely|
| kuntrygal chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
WOW! Loved it!
| lulabelljane chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
This story was all kinds of amazing! I loved how they opened up to each other and got to know one another before they slept together...it made it all the more special! Great job!
| pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Have to say, that's one of the most well written fanfictions I've read.
Very good job. I like how you give Edward and Bella their own history, and they know each other for a month before anything happens. They're not just two random strangers like most fanfictions.
| 123iluvzac chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
absolutely loved the lemon ;) so amazing
| cullenette chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
its actually beautiful.
i know its a one shot, but you should continue with it.
its a great story! probably give a deeper insight into Bella's character
| MartaSwan chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
wow...so sweet. it was wonderful
| KalliCullen chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
dear god that was SO GOOD!
you should consider making this a full length story and not just a one shot!
your writing leaves me speechless :)
| FolsomBoogie chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
LOVED IT! One of the best in the bunch!
| shootdangit chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
This is probably my favourite one that I've read so far for this contest, and taht's saying something cause I'm sure I've read over 50 of them. I enjoyed how long it was, and how you had a lot of character development and backstory, which is something a lot of them lack. I can't wait to read the rest of them!
| cullenitis chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
perfection. simply perfection!
| one sexy tribble chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
omg i loved it. i liked that it was a full story even though it was a one shot. i'm glad that they had time to develop a relationship instead of just jumping into bed together like they do in some au stories. all in all very god. two thumbs up. i would love to see more.
| olivia chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
It was very lovely and not long at all. if you cut out any part then the story just wouldnt have been as good. well written and i loved the plot. heres a virtual cookie: O (imagine it has chocolate chips)
| sweetswirlypop chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Aw. I love it.
| fightinsurfgrl chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Wow, that was awesome! Sad about Edward's mom though. I like that even though Edward was an actor he wasn't overly full of himself.
| SpecialK199 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
This was a really good read, I can't understand why it hasn't been reviewed before me! Great story progression, and I lOVE it when writers leave a nice long chapter to get through.
Nicely written, well presented, and good character development. More please!