|Reviews for No Mercy|
| BANKAIZEN chapter 4 . 8/8
nice omake family guy reference
| 1991Kira chapter 7 . 7/14
Still a much better story than the Naruto manga...
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/10
I will not let sakua Ion be in with one who had to fase the doom and goom and the pine too but the one who will good by and get it oven you fools
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/10
why not get both temari sakura and ion and some others too as will to good to see in life Naruto
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/10
why not took 3 cound grils 1 from the rainfall 1 from the sand 4 from the lves and 1 from the sound and got some more too be his hot grils to be in bed with him Naruto
| sonofgoku941 chapter 4 . 5/29
OH MY FUCKING GOD?! I can't believe that last part in the omake was a tribute to Stewie's birth on Family Guy. I am trying my hardest not to laugh at that since that was just how the youngest Griffin's birth went, except instead of the countries of the real world, it was that of the Elemental Nations. I think Naruto and Temari may have brought forward another Stewie Griffin to their world or worse. May God have mercy on the souls of the people of the Narutoverse. I have to give you props for this last tidbit in this chapter, VFSnake. You rock! Oh, if you could, could you update Maleficent Kitsune, please? I want to see what happens next after Chapter 11.
| agitofang666 chapter 4 . 4/15
stewie griffin haha
| Cullen Walsh chapter 3 . 3/21
Same just dame ow and get in there Naruto
| Cullen Walsh chapter 1 . 3/21
Ho-ho-ho-O is well be a good one
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/18
Dante virgil and nero are from devil may cry right
| Ettore chapter 4 . 1/3
That omake was... interesting...
| herart chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
Very good story.
This is one to read for those who wants a story about Naruto taking revenge, almost without caring, with a sense of justice, and not much gore.
| nero 44 chapter 4 . 10/26/2014
excellent chapter VF. love the family guy reference in the omake.
| doubledamn chapter 7 . 10/21/2014
Would a majority of Naruto's children be Demons (Nibi) and Half Demons (Everyone else)?
| PugTheMagician chapter 7 . 9/25/2014
hmm, short story but in no way bad for it. i like how you had naruto be essentially reborn as a demon. i like how you had the fuma clan join naruto and how they relocated to wave. i also like how you dealt with kabuto, nice touch. i especially like how you dealt with kumo and having yugito have her "fun" with those who treated her like dirt. i like how you had kimimaru join naruto and showed just how strong he could be if his illness hadn't taken hold of him. almost all of the fights in this story are extremely short and too the point, which is good in my opinion. when's the last time you were in a street fight that lasted hours? the lemons are very good. i especially liked the one where nibi got naruto all to herself, just something about the dominance (probably why establishing dominance was a favorite of mine). i liked how you started the story off without outright stating the shadowy charecter was naruto, adds well to the suspense. i like how you had jiraiya and tsunade both have skeletons in their closet regarding naruto. i can't really say that much else, i liked what you did with the edo tensei not controlling those in the shinigamis belly. i like how you had konan join and NOT be another women in the harem, too many times does it happen that every women the charecter meets is nothing more than a cock sleeve with a short back story for the main charecter. that being said, that isn't a problem at all to me provided the main focus of the story is lemons, its to be expected. i guess i feel sorry for kankuro being the punching bag of both naruto's children and wives, seems slightly undeserved but still humorous. i also like the pairing between sasame and gaara, and also gaara becoming a demonlord. thats pretty much it, i think i'll browse through some more of your stories